3 Dave Covers (Vids)
3 Dave Covers (Vids)
Hey guys I just did little covers of a few dave songs with me and my guitar, no singing...didn't want to ruin them...but let me know what you think. I know they aren't the exact way he might play them....they are just my little variations.
The Stone:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ypmav1DCo5I
Warehouse:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGCQ258FsTA
Two Step:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ux1jCQI2Kl0
The Stone:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ypmav1DCo5I
Warehouse:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGCQ258FsTA
Two Step:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ux1jCQI2Kl0
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Thanks for the comments guys. Can you point out where my rhythm needs help? I guess I don't really hear it....too biasedmbent4679 wrote:Work on your rythem. It's sloppy.

Sure I could play the stone the rate Dave plays it but it would be a lot more boring for me, and for the viewer.
And what do you mean I make playing the guitar look hard? It can be hard, difficult songs are difficult to play...nothing wrong with that.
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Here's a critique of your Two Step video...
It was way too rushed and played a little too hard. It makes a beautiful song sound like a mess. I'm really not sure what you're playing around 0:50 but it didn't sound like it fit. The rhythm on the verse was completely off, sounded way too fast and choppy. I'd also try to play those chords the way they are on this site. It didn't look like you used your pinky at all during the verse, which makes playing the song a lot easier IMO. When you went back to the intro you got a little crazy there
I'd try to take that down about 5 notches. It makes it sound like you're butchering it. The chords you were playing around the 1:35 mark sounded a bit off. Actually the whole part between 1:45 and 2:02 sounded really off, I'm not exactly sure what you were playing there but it sounded very rough.
Overall, the rhythm was way off for most of it. You were also hitting a lot of strings/notes that you shouldn't have. I'd say work on the verse the most, because the rhythm wasn't even close to the way it should be.
It was way too rushed and played a little too hard. It makes a beautiful song sound like a mess. I'm really not sure what you're playing around 0:50 but it didn't sound like it fit. The rhythm on the verse was completely off, sounded way too fast and choppy. I'd also try to play those chords the way they are on this site. It didn't look like you used your pinky at all during the verse, which makes playing the song a lot easier IMO. When you went back to the intro you got a little crazy there

Overall, the rhythm was way off for most of it. You were also hitting a lot of strings/notes that you shouldn't have. I'd say work on the verse the most, because the rhythm wasn't even close to the way it should be.
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i only listened to the stone. you should play the chord in the verse that the tabs on this site have (you're just leaving out one note). and i think when you play that chord you're playing it way too hard compared to how loud you're playing the main riff. and you need to clean up that riff anyway.
and the chorus, again.. i think you were playing too hard.
and the chorus, again.. i think you were playing too hard.
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i would work on timing and rythm of the other songs before two step, it's a little more complicated imo.Speenis wrote:Here's a critique of your Two Step video...
It was way too rushed and played a little too hard. It makes a beautiful song sound like a mess. I'm really not sure what you're playing around 0:50 but it didn't sound like it fit. The rhythm on the verse was completely off, sounded way too fast and choppy. I'd also try to play those chords the way they are on this site. It didn't look like you used your pinky at all during the verse, which makes playing the song a lot easier IMO. When you went back to the intro you got a little crazy thereI'd try to take that down about 5 notches. It makes it sound like you're butchering it. The chords you were playing around the 1:35 mark sounded a bit off. Actually the whole part between 1:45 and 2:02 sounded really off, I'm not exactly sure what you were playing there but it sounded very rough.
Overall, the rhythm was way off for most of it. You were also hitting a lot of strings/notes that you shouldn't have. I'd say work on the verse the most, because the rhythm wasn't even close to the way it should be.
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I dunno, I thought Two Step was the easiest rhythm-wise.buffjam9011 wrote:i would work on timing and rythm of the other songs before two step, it's a little more complicated imo.Speenis wrote:Here's a critique of your Two Step video...
It was way too rushed and played a little too hard. It makes a beautiful song sound like a mess. I'm really not sure what you're playing around 0:50 but it didn't sound like it fit. The rhythm on the verse was completely off, sounded way too fast and choppy. I'd also try to play those chords the way they are on this site. It didn't look like you used your pinky at all during the verse, which makes playing the song a lot easier IMO. When you went back to the intro you got a little crazy thereI'd try to take that down about 5 notches. It makes it sound like you're butchering it. The chords you were playing around the 1:35 mark sounded a bit off. Actually the whole part between 1:45 and 2:02 sounded really off, I'm not exactly sure what you were playing there but it sounded very rough.
Overall, the rhythm was way off for most of it. You were also hitting a lot of strings/notes that you shouldn't have. I'd say work on the verse the most, because the rhythm wasn't even close to the way it should be.
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lol... i guess its different from person to personSpeenis wrote:I dunno, I thought Two Step was the easiest rhythm-wise.buffjam9011 wrote:i would work on timing and rythm of the other songs before two step, it's a little more complicated imo.Speenis wrote:Here's a critique of your Two Step video...
It was way too rushed and played a little too hard. It makes a beautiful song sound like a mess. I'm really not sure what you're playing around 0:50 but it didn't sound like it fit. The rhythm on the verse was completely off, sounded way too fast and choppy. I'd also try to play those chords the way they are on this site. It didn't look like you used your pinky at all during the verse, which makes playing the song a lot easier IMO. When you went back to the intro you got a little crazy thereI'd try to take that down about 5 notches. It makes it sound like you're butchering it. The chords you were playing around the 1:35 mark sounded a bit off. Actually the whole part between 1:45 and 2:02 sounded really off, I'm not exactly sure what you were playing there but it sounded very rough.
Overall, the rhythm was way off for most of it. You were also hitting a lot of strings/notes that you shouldn't have. I'd say work on the verse the most, because the rhythm wasn't even close to the way it should be.
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