DER GRAUE WEG (german version of Grey Street)

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DER GRAUE WEG (german version of Grey Street)

Unread post by borocks » Sun Dec 07, 2003 2:50 pm

so this is my second attempt to do a translation of a Dave song. Some of you might remember the first I did some month ago... Gravedigger (Totengräber)

This has got two tracks, one guitar and one vocal.
I didn't do the slide in the verse riff because I used an alterned tab of Ranting Thespian.
As for the vocals, I had some problems at some parts to find the same amout of syllables to express the same in german. Therefore, the timing of the lyrics is a little rough here and there.
I will post the lyrics tomorrow for those who are interested

Tell me what you guys think of it.
Thanx, Bo



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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Dec 07, 2003 2:58 pm

:lol: Bo that was awesome to hear , funny as hell , cracked me up right from the beginning to the end :lol: Good shit man , solid playing , from 1:55 - 2:05 very powerful right there , the voice is amazing , and the end screaming was perfect :) very good , and solid voice , did i mention it was funny ? :lol: Good stuff Bo :)

Maybe i should try getting my ass together and do it in Danish :lol:
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Unread post by Xoosh » Sun Dec 07, 2003 3:29 pm

i havent had a chance to listen to it yet, but i am definitely definitely going to check this out. I am fuckin PSYCHED that there is someone doing stuff like this here =)

hell yeah!!
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sun Dec 07, 2003 5:13 pm

Nice, very nice
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Unread post by PlayLikeDave » Sun Dec 07, 2003 11:41 pm

LOL...Freakin sick...well done Bo

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Unread post by Xoosh » Mon Dec 08, 2003 1:22 pm

besides the fact that your guitar was out of tune (you shuold always retune before recording...) this song gave me chills to listen to in german. infact i think i like it better in german then in english... much more morbid.

Your voice was AWESOME. Great job -- very solid. watch 1:37 with your vocals. when you get into the part at 2:20 or so to 2:45 totengraeber... sooo sincere and i truely believe what you're saying.

hah, that was so fucking cool. god damn man. want to do a cover together?

that'd be awesome...
verruckt =)

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Tue Dec 09, 2003 12:08 am

That was really cool, voice was on key, and the translation gave the track a new spin

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Unread post by borocks » Tue Dec 09, 2003 5:28 am

Thanx for the comments guys, I greatly appreciate that. Here are the lyrics for those who want to try to sing along with it ... :)

Oh sieh mal wie sie zuhört
Was sie denkt das sagt sie nicht
Sie träumt nur wirr vor sich hin
Und starrt auf den grauen Weg
Sie denkt Hey
Wie kam ich hier hin?
Ich träumte mich tausend Mal um die ganze Welt
Aber kann nicht weg von hier

Jetzt fühlt sie die Leere tief in sich
Und tät alles um dem zu entfliehen
Aber all die Farben verfliessen – zu grau

Und es bricht ihr Herz
Oh wie sie wünschte es wär’ anders
Sie betet zu Gott fast jede Nacht
Obwohl sie Zweifel hat an ihm
Gibt sie die Hoffnung dennoch nicht auf
Und sie sagt: ich bet’!
Aber sie wird nicht erhört
Bin ich dazu verdammt denn ganz allein
Von diesem Ort abzuhauen

Sie fühlt die Einsamkeit tief in sich
Und tät alles um dem zu entfliehen
Und obwohl rotes Blut aus ihrem Herzen fliesst

Fühlt sie nur eisig blaue Kälte
Wenn alle Farben verfliessen – zu grau

Und es bricht ihr Herz
Da ist ein Fremder vor ihrer Tür
Der sagt, nimm deine Träume
Und mach sie so real wie es nur geht
Du brauchst nur den Mut dazu
Aber sie schreit
Draussen schleicht ein Verrückter umher

Ich lebe an der Ecke zum grauen Weg und am Ende der Welt

Und sie fühlt die Leere tief in sich
Und tät alles um dem zu entfliehen
Und obwohl rotes Blut aus ihrem Herzen fliesst

Fühlt sie nur eisig blaue Kälte
Sie möchte alle Fenster einschlagen
Und ihr Leben in Brand setzen
Sie könnte alles verändern mit den
Farben hell und leuchtend
Aber all die Farben verfliessen – zu grau

Und es bricht ihr Herz
Es bricht ihr Herz
Zu grau, yeah
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Unread post by Xoosh » Tue Dec 09, 2003 8:30 am

hey i posted in the wrong spot. i listeend to gravedigger not grey street.

my bad
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Unread post by geekmug » Tue Dec 09, 2003 12:20 pm

Xoosh wrote:hey i posted in the wrong spot. i listeend to gravedigger not grey street.

my bad
grey street was out of tune too, though. Not as bad, but still out.. I think maybe just the G-string was flat.

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Unread post by borocks » Wed Dec 10, 2003 5:54 am

geekmug wrote:
Xoosh wrote:hey i posted in the wrong spot. i listeend to gravedigger not grey street.

my bad
grey street was out of tune too, though. Not as bad, but still out.. I think maybe just the G-string was flat.
it was the B-string I think, I didn't ring properly but it was in tune though
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Unread post by bsquared586 » Thu Dec 11, 2003 9:58 pm

great to see someone representing german here! next to physics, it's the best class at college
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Unread post by Xoosh » Fri Dec 12, 2003 12:55 am

for me it is the best class in college.
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Unread post by borocks » Fri Dec 12, 2003 11:33 am

Does anyone of you speak any german?


Hey Xoosh, thanx for the positive review of Gravedigger...
And to answer your question I'd really look forward to doing a collaboration with you dude.
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Unread post by Xoosh » Fri Dec 12, 2003 12:48 pm

ja ich spriche deutsch. im just learning it though and im pretty bad at spelling =)

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