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some of my songs

Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Apr 25, 2005 12:27 pm

I finally got around to sticking some of my songs on usendit... Tell me what you think, i have words for the, but was only able to get a mic for one of them, the rest are picup from my guitar. tell me what you think.

Movin On
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2V3U ... MI196WU1AP

Helpless
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=109X ... Z57JQUTRZ7

Change
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2O1H ... 0K784YG9N3

I Know
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36XA ... D1NBZTKD5U

Senior Song
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3TCR ... FYBJK43L2J

Run Down
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XUU ... 1KB34ASX0Z

G Song (Just an idea at this point, rough...)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1J0M ... OADR2NHTJZ

Mask (Also rough at this point)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2BE5 ... QJBORUUBPK

Acoustic American Baby (This is in a seperate post but i figured i'd put it up..)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3JWH ... 3H5U7FLF4M

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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:04 pm

too many to listen to them all.

change was cool. i liked the music, your voice is kinda muffled so i couldn't really understand all of the lyrics. i liked whatever you used for the beat in the background. what was that

useless was a waste of potential. it was a cool little riff, and i could hear where the electric was supposed to be going but i you kept hitting wrong notes etc and it made it unenjoyable. you should go back and redo that song cause it sounds like it could have beena really cool lead part.

i listened to one more it was a minute clip of a guitar playing. are there any more full songs in that list?

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Unread post by mangold » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:51 pm

which one is your best? i dont have the time to listen to them all... direct me towards one
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:17 pm

change was a full song. i didn't listen to them all but a lot of them were just instrumental clips.

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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:04 pm

I think my best are I know and senior song (senior song is long and a little repetative though because i have not put in lyrics, no time or good mic.), listen to i know... Umm when u where talking about useless did u mean helpless? Because i downloaded the clip real quick and realized it was one of the original runs i did with i idea and was not the finished on, ya i hit some wrong notes im looking for the finished version right now, sorry about that. Im still working on the singing part, not verry good but working on it. It does sound muffled, ill work on pronouncing better. Thanks for the comments, as soon as im out of school for the summer ill go in and add words and probably end up redoing all of these so maybe around july or so ill have some better versions, just no friggin time right now and i have no mic for voice. Thanks again for the comments.

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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:35 pm

yea probably. that's my fault. don't know why i wrote useless, i meant helpless.

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Unread post by DRMusic » Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:52 pm

i totially dig I Know........can you post the tabs? I wanna learn how to play it

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Unread post by mangold » Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:57 pm

senior song was cool, like you said a bit repetitve, but it definetly has potential... put some lyrics to that jaunt
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:14 pm

here are the words for senior song (i think it is my best song lyric wise, as the title implies i wrote it at the end of senior year about all the stuff changing and happening..)

-Senior Song-

Started out back maybe 14 years ago
now we're counting down with only days to go
passion building up in all the hardened hearts
emotions breaking out at any cost
friends embrace and all the tears come falling down
There's another day gone

Gradually my heart moves on, a week went by just yeasterday
i wish i could slow down the world today
now you're here now you're gone
a truthi'll just have to accept so i can move on

Sitting here with only hours left to go
realization of this life thats got to go
and empty house and empty room and empty heart
brings a truth a little closer to my heart
a truth that say you've put things off to long
and tomorrow you move on


-I Know-

Laying all alone this night
wishing you here
you stole my heart
and as these nights go by
im wondering how you came
came to be with me but now i know

If it wasnt for you i'd never survive
if it wasnt for you i'd rather die
and as these days they pass us by
i know that this love is not a lie
are you over there thinking of me
while im sitting here loving you

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Unread post by Usaj88 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:50 pm

the lyrics to senior song are pretty moving for anyone approaching senior year.. really cool.
-AJ

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Unread post by mangold » Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:21 pm

mattinbeloit wrote:here are the words for senior song (i think it is my best song lyric wise, as the title implies i wrote it at the end of senior year about all the stuff changing and happening..)

-Senior Song-

Started out back maybe 14 years ago
now we're counting down with only days to go
passion building up in all the hardened hearts
emotions breaking out at any cost
friends embrace and all the tears come falling down
There's another day gone

Gradually my heart moves on, a week went by just yeasterday
i wish i could slow down the world today
now you're here now you're gone
a truthi'll just have to accept so i can move on

Sitting here with only hours left to go
realization of this life thats got to go
and empty house and empty room and empty heart
brings a truth a little closer to my heart
a truth that say you've put things off to long
and tomorrow you move on


-I Know-

Laying all alone this night
wishing you here
you stole my heart
and as these nights go by
im wondering how you came
came to be with me but now i know

If it wasnt for you i'd never survive
if it wasnt for you i'd rather die
and as these days they pass us by
i know that this love is not a lie
are you over there thinking of me
while im sitting here loving you
those are good... so sing em damnit!
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
http://www.andymangold.com

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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:05 pm

i plan on it when im out of school, college is takin up all my time and i dont have a good mic. I'm going to buy a shure mic this summer i think...

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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Thu May 12, 2005 12:56 am

bump...

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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Thu May 12, 2005 2:11 am

you bumped a bunch of dead links?!?!?!?

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Unread post by mangold » Thu May 12, 2005 1:37 pm

all the cool kids are doing it.
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
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