some of my songs
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some of my songs
I finally got around to sticking some of my songs on usendit... Tell me what you think, i have words for the, but was only able to get a mic for one of them, the rest are picup from my guitar. tell me what you think.
Movin On
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2V3U ... MI196WU1AP
Helpless
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=109X ... Z57JQUTRZ7
Change
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2O1H ... 0K784YG9N3
I Know
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36XA ... D1NBZTKD5U
Senior Song
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3TCR ... FYBJK43L2J
Run Down
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XUU ... 1KB34ASX0Z
G Song (Just an idea at this point, rough...)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1J0M ... OADR2NHTJZ
Mask (Also rough at this point)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2BE5 ... QJBORUUBPK
Acoustic American Baby (This is in a seperate post but i figured i'd put it up..)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3JWH ... 3H5U7FLF4M
Enjoy!
Movin On
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2V3U ... MI196WU1AP
Helpless
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=109X ... Z57JQUTRZ7
Change
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2O1H ... 0K784YG9N3
I Know
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36XA ... D1NBZTKD5U
Senior Song
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3TCR ... FYBJK43L2J
Run Down
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XUU ... 1KB34ASX0Z
G Song (Just an idea at this point, rough...)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1J0M ... OADR2NHTJZ
Mask (Also rough at this point)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2BE5 ... QJBORUUBPK
Acoustic American Baby (This is in a seperate post but i figured i'd put it up..)
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3JWH ... 3H5U7FLF4M
Enjoy!
too many to listen to them all.
change was cool. i liked the music, your voice is kinda muffled so i couldn't really understand all of the lyrics. i liked whatever you used for the beat in the background. what was that
useless was a waste of potential. it was a cool little riff, and i could hear where the electric was supposed to be going but i you kept hitting wrong notes etc and it made it unenjoyable. you should go back and redo that song cause it sounds like it could have beena really cool lead part.
i listened to one more it was a minute clip of a guitar playing. are there any more full songs in that list?
change was cool. i liked the music, your voice is kinda muffled so i couldn't really understand all of the lyrics. i liked whatever you used for the beat in the background. what was that
useless was a waste of potential. it was a cool little riff, and i could hear where the electric was supposed to be going but i you kept hitting wrong notes etc and it made it unenjoyable. you should go back and redo that song cause it sounds like it could have beena really cool lead part.
i listened to one more it was a minute clip of a guitar playing. are there any more full songs in that list?
which one is your best? i dont have the time to listen to them all... direct me towards one
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
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I think my best are I know and senior song (senior song is long and a little repetative though because i have not put in lyrics, no time or good mic.), listen to i know... Umm when u where talking about useless did u mean helpless? Because i downloaded the clip real quick and realized it was one of the original runs i did with i idea and was not the finished on, ya i hit some wrong notes im looking for the finished version right now, sorry about that. Im still working on the singing part, not verry good but working on it. It does sound muffled, ill work on pronouncing better. Thanks for the comments, as soon as im out of school for the summer ill go in and add words and probably end up redoing all of these so maybe around july or so ill have some better versions, just no friggin time right now and i have no mic for voice. Thanks again for the comments.
senior song was cool, like you said a bit repetitve, but it definetly has potential... put some lyrics to that jaunt
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
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http://www.andymangold.com
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here are the words for senior song (i think it is my best song lyric wise, as the title implies i wrote it at the end of senior year about all the stuff changing and happening..)
-Senior Song-
Started out back maybe 14 years ago
now we're counting down with only days to go
passion building up in all the hardened hearts
emotions breaking out at any cost
friends embrace and all the tears come falling down
There's another day gone
Gradually my heart moves on, a week went by just yeasterday
i wish i could slow down the world today
now you're here now you're gone
a truthi'll just have to accept so i can move on
Sitting here with only hours left to go
realization of this life thats got to go
and empty house and empty room and empty heart
brings a truth a little closer to my heart
a truth that say you've put things off to long
and tomorrow you move on
-I Know-
Laying all alone this night
wishing you here
you stole my heart
and as these nights go by
im wondering how you came
came to be with me but now i know
If it wasnt for you i'd never survive
if it wasnt for you i'd rather die
and as these days they pass us by
i know that this love is not a lie
are you over there thinking of me
while im sitting here loving you
-Senior Song-
Started out back maybe 14 years ago
now we're counting down with only days to go
passion building up in all the hardened hearts
emotions breaking out at any cost
friends embrace and all the tears come falling down
There's another day gone
Gradually my heart moves on, a week went by just yeasterday
i wish i could slow down the world today
now you're here now you're gone
a truthi'll just have to accept so i can move on
Sitting here with only hours left to go
realization of this life thats got to go
and empty house and empty room and empty heart
brings a truth a little closer to my heart
a truth that say you've put things off to long
and tomorrow you move on
-I Know-
Laying all alone this night
wishing you here
you stole my heart
and as these nights go by
im wondering how you came
came to be with me but now i know
If it wasnt for you i'd never survive
if it wasnt for you i'd rather die
and as these days they pass us by
i know that this love is not a lie
are you over there thinking of me
while im sitting here loving you
those are good... so sing em damnit!mattinbeloit wrote:here are the words for senior song (i think it is my best song lyric wise, as the title implies i wrote it at the end of senior year about all the stuff changing and happening..)
-Senior Song-
Started out back maybe 14 years ago
now we're counting down with only days to go
passion building up in all the hardened hearts
emotions breaking out at any cost
friends embrace and all the tears come falling down
There's another day gone
Gradually my heart moves on, a week went by just yeasterday
i wish i could slow down the world today
now you're here now you're gone
a truthi'll just have to accept so i can move on
Sitting here with only hours left to go
realization of this life thats got to go
and empty house and empty room and empty heart
brings a truth a little closer to my heart
a truth that say you've put things off to long
and tomorrow you move on
-I Know-
Laying all alone this night
wishing you here
you stole my heart
and as these nights go by
im wondering how you came
came to be with me but now i know
If it wasnt for you i'd never survive
if it wasnt for you i'd rather die
and as these days they pass us by
i know that this love is not a lie
are you over there thinking of me
while im sitting here loving you
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
http://www.andymangold.com
http://www.andymangold.com
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