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Unread post by borocks » Thu Aug 14, 2003 4:55 pm

Here it is:
http://www.angelfire.com/un/borocks/songs.html

Tell me what you think of it

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Unread post by DropD-MB » Thu Aug 14, 2003 6:46 pm

I'm listening as I write this......

In the intro the third note that is not fluid with the rest of the notes. And in the verse it seems as if the slide should be "ringing" a bit more. I like the little Dave "mumbling" in between the verse & chorus!

Otherwise, you were very consistent throughout the whole song...Which is a good thing whether you play a few notes right or wrong. I would work on the above mentioned parts if you wan't to play exactly like Dave. But a cover is supposed to be your take on the song. And if you are happy with it..then roll with it.

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Unread post by NPR » Thu Aug 14, 2003 7:06 pm

hey man I tried downloading OSW and I only got 8 seconds of it.
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Unread post by Brock » Thu Aug 14, 2003 7:34 pm

NPR wrote:hey man I tried downloading OSW and I only got 8 seconds of it.
Then redownload it, it obviously works.
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Unread post by NPR » Thu Aug 14, 2003 7:41 pm

Well I guess not for me tried several times.
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Unread post by Brock » Thu Aug 14, 2003 7:47 pm

Hmm, that's very strange. Oh well.

Sounded good - agreed on the consistency that drop spoke about. I like the sound of your voice, it's very interesting. Also, it sounded like the guitar was a little out of tune (just enough to bother the ears of the tone-sensitive).
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Unread post by Ando » Thu Aug 14, 2003 8:29 pm

TrippnBill686 wrote:Hmm, that's very strange. Oh well.

Sounded good - agreed on the consistency that drop spoke about. I like the sound of your voice, it's very interesting. Also, it sounded like the guitar was a little out of tune (just enough to bother the ears of the tone-sensitive).
I agree with the out of tune statement. Other than that, Sounded Good
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Thu Aug 14, 2003 11:10 pm

Good work. Everything that needed to be said was, but just wanted to give you another "atta guy"
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Unread post by 4monthguitarplayer » Fri Aug 15, 2003 12:21 am

yo bo, haha. great job on the cover. all of it sounded great
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Unread post by acidrain » Fri Aug 15, 2003 1:28 am

Sounds good. I agree that it does sound a little out of tune. The slide in the verse doesn't sound right.... maybe you're sliding back down after sliding up?

Anyway, sounds good all in all. The Dave noises you made were sweet :)
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Unread post by borocks » Fri Aug 15, 2003 12:22 pm

yeah the guitar's probably a bit out of tune... I normally tune it by ear: I consider the bass-string to be right and tune the others with the fagolet sounds on the 12th fret.

Thanx for your positive requests.
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Sounds good. I agree that it does sound a little out of tune. The slide in the verse doesn't sound right.... maybe you're sliding back down after sliding up?
No I'm not sliding back down to the 8th. I can't see what you mean... Maybe you hear something different?
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