New Original: Solitude

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:01 pm

this is truly your best work i must say tho even if you dont think it is.

reminds me of classical gas a little bit..

awesome, the 2nd recording is perfect
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:10 pm

Tranman66 wrote:this is truly your best work i must say tho even if you dont think it is.

reminds me of classical gas a little bit..

awesome, the 2nd recording is perfect
thank you. :)

I will say that I enjoy the second recording alot better. I think of as one of my more complete recordings.
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Unread post by onid41 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 3:18 pm

yah pat i always enjoy you work, good job man and keep it up
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:05 pm

i love that slide thing that is there with the tapping.. slide or pull off down i dunno what it is sounds awesome.
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Unread post by MOE.PHISH » Mon Feb 21, 2005 1:26 pm

wow very impressive pat, almost kind of an inspirational peice, f i would love to see a vid of it :P
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Unread post by mangold » Mon Feb 21, 2005 3:41 pm

nice work man. theres nothing i can find to critique... so... um.... just post more stuff like this please. your an inspiration to our entire organization.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:01 pm

Three words: Awesome, awesome, and awesome. Sorry, four words.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:47 pm

MWR wrote:Three words: Awesome, awesome, and awesome. Sorry, four words.
Thanks Mike. I really appreciate that. :)

I'm really liking writing songs lately. They seem to be coming together better than before.
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Unread post by hmm69 » Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:57 pm

i like it the chord progression is very cool
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Feb 21, 2005 7:20 pm

Tranman66 wrote:this is truly your best work i must say tho even if you dont think it is.

reminds me of classical gas a little bit..

awesome, the 2nd recording is perfect
i must question this, since the second version was never put up. :lol:
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Feb 21, 2005 7:40 pm

Fantastic Pat. You've really got a nice groove going on there. The only thing I can crit is that the tempo isn't always consistent. But damn, it rocks.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Feb 21, 2005 7:49 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
Tranman66 wrote:this is truly your best work i must say tho even if you dont think it is.

reminds me of classical gas a little bit..

awesome, the 2nd recording is perfect
i must question this, since the second version was never put up. :lol:
I fell for it too. My previous comment still stands: Awesome X 3.

Seems like the second one is more percussive. That tapping part is really growing on me. Tapping doesn't sound very musical a lot of time imo but you did an amazing job with it. The technique serves the composition not the other way around. Outstanding, your best work to date.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Feb 21, 2005 7:51 pm

MWR wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
Tranman66 wrote:this is truly your best work i must say tho even if you dont think it is.

reminds me of classical gas a little bit..

awesome, the 2nd recording is perfect
i must question this, since the second version was never put up. :lol:
I fell for it too. My previous comment still stands: Awesome X 3.

Seems like the second one is more percussive. That tapping part is really growing on me. Tapping doesn't sound very musical a lot of time imo but you did an amazing job with it. The technique serves the composition not the other way around. Outstanding, your best work to date.
Thank you. :) That's really all I can say. I really appreciate it. :)
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Unread post by fatjack » Mon Feb 21, 2005 8:03 pm

the first fingerpicked section kinda has a strange melody when you are sliding. it seems like its going to resolve in a certain place and then repeats the same part. sometimes this is a good thing, but in this case i feel robbed.

and i agree with MWR about the tapping part. that has a great melody and fits the rest of the song well

i have to say i didn't like the part around 2:00 where play just a bass line. it sounded very shakey rhythmically and a little out of place.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Feb 21, 2005 8:15 pm

fatjack wrote:the first fingerpicked section kinda has a strange melody when you are sliding. it seems like its going to resolve in a certain place and then repeats the same part. sometimes this is a good thing, but in this case i feel robbed.

and i agree with MWR about the tapping part. that has a great melody and fits the rest of the song well

i have to say i didn't like the part around 2:00 where play just a bass line. it sounded very shakey rhythmically and a little out of place.
I can kinda see what you're saying about the second part. (i'm assuming you meant second) That's just the song is though. I'm not like hardcore defending it, but I mean if I did it any other way, it wouldn't...be the same if you know what I mean. :lol:

As far as the bass part, I become less and less fond of it the more I listen to it. I mean it's a good start, but I think it needs more than just the bass and four harmonics. Maybe incorporate a subtle tapping melody. I don't know.
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