Original:"Here I am, Crying"
Original:"Here I am, Crying"
I just started a band with one of my friends. We are both named Brian, thus our band name, The Brians. This is our first song, inspired by one of our friends who has a great life but is always depressed.
Throughout the song, we meet an average American- (at least, average where we live.)- he has a family, goes to church but is not necessarily religious, and most importantly, realizes something is missing from his life.
The song has a somewhat religious overtone, but by no means is it Christian music.
Also, we didn't mean for this song to be really deep or really funny. Take it for what it is!
Enjoy, please listen and comment, either here or on dmusic, or both!
http://thebrians.dmusic.com
(click the orange circle/arrow next to the song)
Throughout the song, we meet an average American- (at least, average where we live.)- he has a family, goes to church but is not necessarily religious, and most importantly, realizes something is missing from his life.
The song has a somewhat religious overtone, but by no means is it Christian music.
Also, we didn't mean for this song to be really deep or really funny. Take it for what it is!
Enjoy, please listen and comment, either here or on dmusic, or both!
http://thebrians.dmusic.com
(click the orange circle/arrow next to the song)
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I thought it was pretty good, but definitely room for improvement. One thing I really liked was the little lead guitar runs, they really added something nice to the song. I also liked the way you guys kinda traded vocals back and forth, that was somewhat bnl-ish, which is good in my books. But yeah, the quality could be a little better, but as far as the actual song, it was good. Keep posting.
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thanks! what's 'bnl-ish'? (a band, I assume, but which one?You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:I thought it was pretty good, but definitely room for improvement. One thing I really liked was the little lead guitar runs, they really added something nice to the song. I also liked the way you guys kinda traded vocals back and forth, that was somewhat bnl-ish, which is good in my books. But yeah, the quality could be a little better, but as far as the actual song, it was good. Keep posting.

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idk they all sound alike but dont get me wrong i love the bare naked ladies there fuckin awesome in concert your voice just reminded me of them plus the harmony singing i said it sounded like a spoof cause of the lyrics and never say "sucks" in a song if you want to be taken seriously
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"Trying is first step towards failure."
-Homer Simpson
If i had a hole in my neck id put pennies in it.
"Trying is first step towards failure."
-Homer Simpson
If i had a hole in my neck id put pennies in it.
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