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anyone wanna add bass, violin, drum?? please?

Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Jan 04, 2005 10:21 pm

This is a recording i did with a friend. i played the lead. this is a cover. Rivertown

Anyone that play bass, violin, or drum wanna add another layer to this? Please.

If you do, please save the layer of your instrument as a seperate file, dont mix it with the original.

http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1KF3 ... Z1KHU3GNPP

Thanks a ton!

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Unread post by jeffro » Tue Jan 04, 2005 10:22 pm

I dunno, but I'm sure if you post it in a few more forums someone will do it for you.

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Jan 04, 2005 10:37 pm

ahahahahah
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Jan 05, 2005 1:58 am

The timing on the lead is incredibly off in the intro.

Edit: Get rid of the lead altogether. The rest of it is either off or just sort of bad. Especially if you're going to add any other instruments to the song.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 12:37 pm

mbgreen, can you explain timing? I dont get how a lead can be off timing. I know waht timing is, but show me how to stay on "time". and whats off about the rest of the song?

Obviously, i need to get better at this.

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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:37 pm

Tranman, I'm going to be honest with you: From what I've heard from you, I'd have to say that you have a lot to learn. Right now your playing is pretty sloppy, but you're eager and enthusiastic to learn, and if you keep plugging away you'll keep getting better. Keep up the practice!
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:51 pm

yeah man keep workin at it... oyu remind me of myself back in the day *glazed look in eyes*... we can all improve on these boards and they REALLY helped me.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:10 pm

Yes a lot to learn.... Its my 7th month playing guitar.. and i selflearn. ah well,

can anyone answer the question above about timing? or will it answer itself through practice?
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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:12 pm

Tranman66 wrote:Yes a lot to learn.... Its my 7th month playing guitar.. and i selflearn. ah well,

can anyone answer the question above about timing? or will it answer itself through practice?
Have you ever thought about checking out some lessons from someone? A few tips and pointers and hands-on help might be just what you need.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:21 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
Tranman66 wrote:Yes a lot to learn.... Its my 7th month playing guitar.. and i selflearn. ah well,

can anyone answer the question above about timing? or will it answer itself through practice?
Have you ever thought about checking out some lessons from someone? A few tips and pointers and hands-on help might be just what you need.
i agree man, but i dont have time and i hate the pacing of a teacher. I dont know, i really like being independent with this. I will have to check out videos and books, and this site helps a ton. Besides, i am moving at a very fast pace right now. I haven't seen anyone who plays for 6 months and get down stuffs on guitar as good as i am, :::apply differently to this board lol::: I know people who take lessons and they are going no where. I always want to improve, so i guess over time i am gonna be better and better. My dad is an amazing Classical player, but he never shows me anything...
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Jan 05, 2005 4:21 pm

Tranman66 wrote:
You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
Tranman66 wrote:Yes a lot to learn.... Its my 7th month playing guitar.. and i selflearn. ah well,

can anyone answer the question above about timing? or will it answer itself through practice?
Have you ever thought about checking out some lessons from someone? A few tips and pointers and hands-on help might be just what you need.
i agree man, but i dont have time and i hate the pacing of a teacher. I dont know, i really like being independent with this. I will have to check out videos and books, and this site helps a ton. Besides, i am moving at a very fast pace right now. I haven't seen anyone who plays for 6 months and get down stuffs on guitar as good as i am, :::apply differently to this board lol::: I know people who take lessons and they are going no where. I always want to improve, so i guess over time i am gonna be better and better. My dad is an amazing Classical player, but he never shows me anything...
my one year anniversary of picking up a guitar was last week! i too am self taught. we like twins tranny!
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 6:00 pm

lol
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Unread post by i am sam2 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 6:04 pm

well, even if you want to go fast, any teacher you get...well, they arent teachers for nothing. they can all play and they can go as fast as you can in terms of the pace of learning, so i dont see how thats an excuse.
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Jan 05, 2005 6:10 pm

Timing is inherent most of the time. You see some little kids dancing to a beats, some dance like hippies. Having said that, you can improve with practice though.

Straight up, you're not good enough to make up your own solos right now, however basic. You want to get better? Learn other solos, and be able to play them along with the recording EXACTLY. Learn scales. Practice scales. I don't know if you know any solos by any pros, but I'd be willing to bet it's 2 or less. EVERY guy I know who is good at lead started playing along with their favorites, eventually blending all of that into their own style. You need to crawl before you can walk.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Jan 05, 2005 6:13 pm

thanks man. I know the solos of some metallica songs and layla to clapton. Practice time!
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