Original Song "Green Carpet"

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Original Song "Green Carpet"

Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Dec 27, 2004 4:46 pm

Here ya go:
http://s3.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1FIU3 ... OXBYYPNS94

i recorded it on windows soundrecorder with the cheapo microphone.
its jazzy.

I am both guitar parts...

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Unread post by jeffro » Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:57 pm

From what I could tell the playing was really good, sounded nice, but from 00:12 to about 00:30 it sounded a lot like My Girl.

Also, stop using the windows thing, just get audacity!

http://audacity.sourceforge.net/

Free, sounds good, works well.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:02 pm

i tried it before i did the song and it...errored when i opened it. (audacity) it was from that website aswell...do you knowwhy it would do that? thanks alot for taking the time to listen to my ting! :)

and i hear the "my girl" :evil:
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:20 pm

This is pretty damn good.
Let me guess though, only one take for each track. Give your playing the attention it deserves. You have some really great melodic things going on but it's all masked by the fact that you didn't take the time to get a solid rhythm track.
Do yourself a favor, buy a decent mic and nix the windows recorder. That thing sucks swollen donkey testicles.
Critisism aside you show a ton of promise esp. with the soloing.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:28 pm

MWR wrote:This is pretty damn good.
Let me guess though, only one take for each track. Give your playing the attention it deserves. You have some really great melodic things going on but it's all masked by the fact that you didn't take the time to get a solid rhythm track.
Do yourself a favor, buy a decent mic and nix the windows recorder. That thing sucks swollen donkey testicles.
Critisism aside you show a ton of promise esp. with the soloing.
yes, i did only one take for each. I was so excited at the possibility of having something solid with 2 tracks!

and yes...
a new mic... i will do that with my christmas moonay. I know everyone asks this, but since you are knowledgable, which mic do you suggest?
and..
which program should i use? audacity?
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:39 pm

If you just want a do everything mic that you can use right out the box without a pre-amp or mixer than get a Shure SM57.
Audacity is probably the best free recording software but you CAN get better programs for free...thats a morality issue though.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:40 pm

i have no morals. proceed.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:31 pm

Cubase, Adobe Audition(formerly Cool edit), Live, Cakewalk. Any of them will do the trick.

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Unread post by Easy E » Mon Dec 27, 2004 9:54 pm

MWR wrote:If you just want a do everything mic that you can use right out the box without a pre-amp or mixer than get a Shure SM57.
Audacity is probably the best free recording software but you CAN get better programs for free...thats a morality issue though.
What would you suggest for someone with under 100 dollars?
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 11:53 pm

hey gumbo, do you know how to play My girl, can i get the tab for it?

good job by the way. why do i hate your avatars... weird.
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:47 am

i do NOT know how to play that song.
it is my own cursed luck that Green Carpet is the carpet that stupid girl laid on andput her riff.

i made it first!

But its not EXACTLY the same..

oh no..
im another vanilla ice.
thanks tranman.
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:33 pm

i liked it a lot cept the recording itself. i agree w/ pretty much everything mwr said. great stuff.
you can hear the My Girl for a split second, no biggie. great stuff.

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