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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:59 pm

NoNotThat wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
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fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic
what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve
Something that's your OWN
i didnt yoink that from noone....
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:01 pm

praisedave wrote:
NoNotThat wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic
what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve
Something that's your OWN
i didnt yoink that from noone....
you think you didn't, but you did

its really quite difficult to write a rhythmic pattern that is your own, because basically its all been done, but the fact that you are using a I IV V progression just makes it totally uncreative

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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:02 pm

or V IV I

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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:02 pm

NoNotThat wrote:or V IV I
same thing :P any combination of the 3

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:03 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
NoNotThat wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic
what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve
Something that's your OWN
i didnt yoink that from noone....
you think you didn't, but you did

its really quite difficult to write a rhythmic pattern that is your own, because basically its all been done, but the fact that you are using a I IV V progression just makes it totally uncreative
I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:05 pm

praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:08 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you
keep in mind i dont take lessons and have no musical background... although i assume the I IV V is chord relationships.... so its in (counts on fingers) the key of... C? maybe... i dunno
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:09 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you
keep in mind i dont take lessons and have no musical background... although i assume the I IV V is chord relationships.... so its in (counts on fingers) the key of... C? maybe... i dunno
there you go! now i dont even have to explain anything, your getting better :wink:

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:11 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you
keep in mind i dont take lessons and have no musical background... although i assume the I IV V is chord relationships.... so its in (counts on fingers) the key of... C? maybe... i dunno
there you go! now i dont even have to explain anything, your getting better :wink:
thank you... i try. but... why is F IV and not III... and G IV?
~Andy (The artist formerly known as praisedave)
http://www.andymangold.com

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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:13 pm

how about...why are all of your threads drawn out like this? :P

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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:13 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you
keep in mind i dont take lessons and have no musical background... although i assume the I IV V is chord relationships.... so its in (counts on fingers) the key of... C? maybe... i dunno
there you go! now i dont even have to explain anything, your getting better :wink:
thank you... i try. but... why is F IV and not III... and G IV?
G is not IV, its V

C is I, F is IV, and G is V

C D E F G
1 2 3 4 5

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:14 pm

NoNotThat wrote:how about...why are all of your threads drawn out like this? :P
i dont kno...
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:15 pm

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:16 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote: I IV V meaning timing? if its all been done how do i write one thats original?
ummmm... not so much...

just change the title to the correct key and maybe i will explain it to you
keep in mind i dont take lessons and have no musical background... although i assume the I IV V is chord relationships.... so its in (counts on fingers) the key of... C? maybe... i dunno
there you go! now i dont even have to explain anything, your getting better :wink:
thank you... i try. but... why is F IV and not III... and G IV?
G is not IV, its V

C is I, F is IV, and G is V

C D E F G
1 2 3 4 5
okay... i see... and how do i know the key is C? like if write a song with the chord progression G A F B is it in the key of A? what determines key? thanks btw
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