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For Her...

Unread post by firedancer86 » Wed Apr 30, 2003 8:40 pm

This is an original I posted on V-day for my girlfriend...

Some have heard this, some haven't, but I personaly believ it is my best (lol) work...I actually didn't improv this!

I still need to put some sweet lyrics to it yet...anywho...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/forher.mp3
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Apr 30, 2003 9:53 pm

Thoroughly enjoyed the song. I mean, that was damn good...Its got a good percussive sound to it, and the way you slap those individual notes is pretty cool. (I'm not implying that it sounds dave-like, you've def got your own style going here.) Ok, so if you wrote this for a girl, I know there are lyrics. Dont bullshit me now, fire. :wink: Jury's still out for me on the synth thing in the background. I cant decide if I like that part...The song sounds very pro man. Good job.
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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Thu May 01, 2003 12:48 am

I really dig the progression, and I personally really liked the synth stuff in the background. Gave it an that.......etherical? sound.......I don't think that's the word I am looking for but.....that spacey kind of sound. Yeah. Good job. I like it alot.......if it had words I might just listen to in regularly.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Thu May 01, 2003 5:13 am

I am hooked on this one fire :lol: and yeah if you wrote this for a girl , where's the lyrics then ;) and the tab ? :lol:

Great job here fire , i enjoyed all of it

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Unread post by ryopan » Thu May 01, 2003 3:52 pm

i really loved this. such a sweet bounce to it. like everyone else, id love some lyrics. that song it too sweet not to be sung to. awesome man.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu May 01, 2003 4:22 pm

Fire.............Fire..........FIRE!! WHAT THE???
Sounds incredible to me man..im trying to think of what it reminds me of........got it, ever hear the theme to Twin Peaks? That really EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRY track...thats what it reminds me of, the synth or whatever you did in the background really made it for me... I'd really like to hear that with some lyrics.

I bet you got some after playing that for your girlfriend didn't you? :D :D

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Thu May 01, 2003 6:52 pm

abstenance man :lol: :wink: :P 8) 2 Christians...purity is the deal...and before I get a "you don't know what you are missing" response, we have gone nearly 2 years now without problems so...:wink:

But seriously, thanks for the responses...actually for lyrics...I came up with about 20 sets of lyrics, but I never think they are good enough for her...still in working progress...not to mention, it is a HARD song to sing to...unless you are Peter Gabriel or Sting lol...thanks again guys...
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Unread post by bugman96 » Thu May 01, 2003 7:02 pm

gregplaysguitar wrote:. Gave it an that.......etherical? sound.......I don't think that's the word I am looking for but.....that spacey kind of sound. .
ethereal?

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Unread post by jsgksu » Thu May 01, 2003 7:10 pm

Im listening to this right now, about 1:00 into it and I must say I really like it so far. The part at 1:40 is really cool, I liked that a lot, the change at 2:20 too. Did you say you have lyrics for this, you should put those down on top of it or something, whatever youve got so far just to hear something. Towards the end the part in the background is really cool, okay I just got done, damn that was really good.
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Unread post by MyHeartIsYours813 » Thu May 01, 2003 7:17 pm

Fire, I have heard this before and must say have LOVED it since I first heard it but finally got a chance to download, and it's going on my next cd mix! Thank you for your great stuff man!
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Thu May 01, 2003 7:53 pm

MyHeartIsYours813 wrote:Fire, I have heard this before and must say have LOVED it since I first heard it but finally got a chance to download, and it's going on my next cd mix! Thank you for your great stuff man!
cool...now to find a record deal huh? :roll:
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Unread post by madtadder » Thu May 01, 2003 8:19 pm

hey, sounds even better than the first time i heard it, haha. im sitting here listening to it and i've already started humming a melody line so it probably wouldn't be that hard to put lyrics to it if you invested some time.
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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Fri May 02, 2003 1:11 am

bugman96 wrote:
gregplaysguitar wrote:. Gave it an that.......etherical? sound.......I don't think that's the word I am looking for but.....that spacey kind of sound. .
ethereal?
Thats probably it......

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri May 02, 2003 4:15 am

[quote="firedancer86"]abstenance man :lol: :wink: :P 8) 2 Christians...purity is the deal...and before I get a "you don't know what you are missing" response, we have gone nearly 2 years now without problems so...:wink:
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Really? Wow......that's some serious willpower. Kudos to you my man

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Unread post by barcode » Fri May 02, 2003 5:16 pm

sounds extremely good...i really liked the part where you changed up the tempo (the bridge, as it were, i suppose)...oh yeah, and good going with the abstenance! my girlfriend and i are in the same boat and just had our three year anniversary! :) someday, it will be everyone else that doesn't know what they missed :wink:

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