A James Taylor Cover

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A James Taylor Cover

Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Apr 15, 2004 1:53 pm

Wow, i've realized I haven't posted a cover in about a month so I figured I was due (wether you like it or not! :lol: ) I've been so busy lately I've only had time to learn one new song, and it happens to be James Taylor's -- Carolina in my Mind. This song was quite a different step for me from covering Mayer and Mraz. I think my interpretation gives it a new feel kind of. Well tell me what ya think.
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:02 pm

Very interesting to listen to. I know you stated that your version is a "new feel," but the timing and some of the vocals were pretty far off. Perhaps that was intentional but I suppose I wasn't open to it. I'm pretty picky when it comes to James Taylor, though. Your voice is in fact quite enjoyable - a mix of John Mayer with a punk aspect. The guitar was pretty good. Off in a number of places but then again, maybe this was intentional as it didn't sound like mistakes - just you playing something different. Thanks for posting it.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:08 pm

holy crap hors

james taylor just responded to you covering one of his songs

holy crap (in strongbad voice)

i found this pretty enjoyable...i liked your voice!

i'm sorry i don't know the song well enough to critique other than that, but i enjoyed it! thanks!
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:09 pm

Matty Boom wrote:holy crap hors

james taylor just responded to you covering one of his songs

holy crap (in strongbad voice)
:lol: Oh man...
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Apr 15, 2004 11:49 pm

Greedy, when you said some of the timing and vocals were off do you mean off from the original, or off key all together. I didn't think I really went off key that much, if so tell me where so I can improve, thanks!
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Fri Apr 16, 2004 12:00 am

horsmar15 wrote:Greedy, when you said some of the timing and vocals were off do you mean off from the original, or off key all together. I didn't think I really went off key that much, if so tell me where so I can improve, thanks!
Off from the original, certainly not off-key together. I actually enjoyed your voice very much. There are a lot of instances where it differs. Listen to the original and if you can't detect them I'll point them out. I feel bad for being bitchy because I think you have a very unique voice and a lot of talent. Nice job all-around.
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:27 am

Thanks for clarifying that man, and thanks for the compliment I really appreciate it, especially coming from a talented musican like yourself.
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Unread post by calsteamahater » Fri Apr 16, 2004 12:59 pm

Good song overall. At some parts it sounds like you are a little tense with the vocals. But good as always

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