!!!!!!!Cannonball-Damien Rice cover!!!!!!!!

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!!!!!!!Cannonball-Damien Rice cover!!!!!!!!

Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Tue Mar 02, 2004 11:12 pm

Yo!!!!!!!

It's been a while so I thought i'd post a cover..
Tell me what ya got to say please.

EDIT: updated version

http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=179R ... NAWCP7SH0U
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Unread post by isaac » Tue Mar 02, 2004 11:47 pm

great great cover miguel.

the guitar was spot on. my only problem was the vocals at times. you don't hold some notes as long as needed and in a way it gives it a bit of an abruptness. the beginning was good and no problems there, except a little wavering on the falsetto, but once you hit the louder parts some notes are just a little too short. you held "cannonball" just fine, though. a bit of a break during "step a little closer to me." the 2nd chorus sounds too strained, but it may be attempts at interjecting emotion. when you do it again it's smoothed out a little better, until you hit courage, which sounds strained again and could be smoothed out. the falsettos were a lot better during then, but again, strain on those loud parts, which i know you can smooth out because you have such an awesome voice already.

great job, though. if you smooth out the vocals, it'll be a perfect cover.

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Unread post by calsteamahater » Tue Mar 02, 2004 11:57 pm

Good job man, i like the different guitar parts working together. I think you have a good voice but you didnt put enough emotion into the song. I would like to hear more songs from you. Keep up the good work!

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Unread post by DropD-MB » Wed Mar 03, 2004 7:55 am

hey HillBilly...

Its been awhile!

Although, I had never heard the song before & am not acquainted with the artist I really enjoyed it. You still seem to be be one of the top players in this forum. Good Job.

In fact Im gonna go download some music from this guy... Any recommendations?

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Unread post by isaac » Wed Mar 03, 2004 10:50 am

The Blower's Daughter (1 and 2), Cold Water, Cannonball, Delicate, The Professor, Older Chests, Amie...etc.etc.

Every song of his has something to offer, but those are the ones I usually listen to.

Enjoy.
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Unread post by Buck23 » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:16 pm

Awesome song...this is the first time I've heard anything by him, but I imagine you cover it well. Guitar was the money, how many tracks was that? I liked the singing, it sounded a little mellow, which went with the song well IMO. some of the higher notes weren't perfect, but those are damn hard. In short, nice f'ing work man. I'm sure people have asked you this before, but have you taken lessons? how long? how do I find a good vocal teacher?
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Wed Mar 03, 2004 7:14 pm

isaac wrote:great great cover miguel.

the guitar was spot on. my only problem was the vocals at times. you don't hold some notes as long as needed and in a way it gives it a bit of an abruptness. the beginning was good and no problems there, except a little wavering on the falsetto, but once you hit the louder parts some notes are just a little too short. you held "cannonball" just fine, though. a bit of a break during "step a little closer to me." the 2nd chorus sounds too strained, but it may be attempts at interjecting emotion. when you do it again it's smoothed out a little better, until you hit courage, which sounds strained again and could be smoothed out. the falsettos were a lot better during then, but again, strain on those loud parts, which i know you can smooth out because you have such an awesome voice already.

great job, though. if you smooth out the vocals, it'll be a perfect cover.

9/10 chopsticks.
thanks for that indepth review. As for the vocals, i've been sick so my voice has suffered a bit and i did the vocals to this with little to no prep.... enough excuses. good review, thanks bud ill work on it

DropD-MB wrote:hey HillBilly...

Its been awhile!

Although, I had never heard the song before & am not acquainted with the artist I really enjoyed it. You still seem to be be one of the top players in this forum. Good Job.

In fact Im gonna go download some music from this guy... Any recommendations?
Hey DropD, it's been a while...wassup bro? Thanks for the comments...
As for Damien Rice, ive only just got his album..it's pretty decent stuff. I'd add ''I Remember'' to Isaac's list though. It's good stuff.
Buck23 wrote:Awesome song...this is the first time I've heard anything by him, but I imagine you cover it well. Guitar was the money, how many tracks was that? I liked the singing, it sounded a little mellow, which went with the song well IMO. some of the higher notes weren't perfect, but those are damn hard. In short, nice f'ing work man. I'm sure people have asked you this before, but have you taken lessons? how long? how do I find a good vocal teacher?
Thanks man, I appreciate that. I haven't had any lessons but i've read a few books on singing and breathing exercises and so on. Mostly just from singing any chance I get.

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Mar 04, 2004 1:51 am

I really enjoyed that! a very nice cover of that song. You can really tell that you put some time into it.
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Thu Mar 04, 2004 2:51 am

I've never heard this song before but it seems like it should be sung mellow like you did Miguel...I noticed that once maybe the falsetto part wasn't as strong as you could do it but man, your voice has really gotten polished. You've always had a great voice, but I remember times when it would slightly slip out of key sometimes. It doesn't do that any more. Your voice has gotten even better now. it's sounds more "professional". As for the guitar, you played the song just like it was your own, kept rhtyhm, etc...I have to say that I'm not too keen on the song itself, but it's not yours anyway!

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Mar 05, 2004 5:28 pm

horsmar15 wrote:I really enjoyed that! a very nice cover of that song. You can really tell that you put some time into it.
thanks...took about an hour and a half :D
DmbFanJason wrote:I've never heard this song before but it seems like it should be sung mellow like you did Miguel...I noticed that once maybe the falsetto part wasn't as strong as you could do it but man, your voice has really gotten polished. You've always had a great voice, but I remember times when it would slightly slip out of key sometimes. It doesn't do that any more. Your voice has gotten even better now. it's sounds more "professional". As for the guitar, you played the song just like it was your own, kept rhtyhm, etc...I have to say that I'm not too keen on the song itself, but it's not yours anyway!

thanks Jason... you don't like the song? damn dude, you gotta try play it...it's a hell of a lot of fun

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Unread post by MyHeartIsYours813 » Fri Mar 19, 2004 2:57 pm

That was pretty darn good...I love Damien Rice...I'm workin on getting the vocals on Volcano down..but my range is completely different...I envy those that are good at singing such as you lol
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Unread post by jsgksu » Fri Mar 19, 2004 4:44 pm

Once again, amazing, that was really good, I just recently heard this song and I really like it, you covered it great. I tried to learn this the other day and now Im really looking into it, Im havin a little trouble but I thing your cover will help. Thanks for posting again and keep it up, that was awesome.
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Unread post by ElGuitarrista » Fri Mar 19, 2004 9:13 pm

I really enjoyed listening to this. I'm not familiar with the original tune... but I like the song already. I loved the guitar in this piece. (how many tracks?)The vocals were also really good... I wish I could get my voice in that range. I think the level on the vocal track could be a little higher. Great job.

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Sun Mar 21, 2004 7:23 pm

thanks ya'll :D

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Unread post by mdel21 » Sun Mar 21, 2004 7:51 pm

Great job.

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