NEW CLIP 12-19 (i dont think its that davish.. do you?)

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NEW CLIP 12-19 (i dont think its that davish.. do you?)

Unread post by Pickles » Fri Dec 19, 2003 9:40 pm

i just came up with this one... i reaaaaally like it.... only thing im not sure about is that last chord... ill have to see... anyway, tell me whatcha think. i couldnt record much more than that because i can only record up to 60 seconds... oh well. nothing hard, but im not done yet. and also, if something doesnt sound right in the song, its because i forgot what i was playing while recording. hehe :lol:

http://www.angelfire.com/rock3/mystuff41/12-19.mp3
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Unread post by Chadrap127 » Fri Dec 19, 2003 10:57 pm

Reminds Me of #41, good job though!!
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Unread post by Pickles » Fri Dec 19, 2003 10:58 pm

reminds you of #41? sigh.... i was hoping it wouldnt remind anyone of anything... thanks for replying at least.
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Unread post by Pickles » Fri Dec 19, 2003 10:59 pm

doh i just looked at the tab from #41.... sigh.... scratch that idea of originality...
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Dec 20, 2003 2:59 am

Yeah Shane it reminds me a bit of #41 as well :) The tune itself has something sweet over it but it needs a little more variation in my opinion.
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sat Dec 20, 2003 9:21 am

reminds me of #41 and STJL put together.. lol
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Unread post by Pickles » Sat Dec 20, 2003 10:12 am

well ill be working on something to differentiate it more... sigh.... *shoots himself in the face*

edit: just looked at STJL... i never learned that song... dave is there anything you havent done? *continues to shoot*
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Unread post by PlayLikeDave » Sat Dec 20, 2003 2:09 pm

I duno about you, but the first chord def sounds to me like the one that begins WWBOM, and it really reminded me of that. Very nice tho.

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Unread post by mbgreen » Sat Dec 20, 2003 6:54 pm

Sing a different melody over it, and it'll pass. Of course, a bridge and chorus would help mold the song into something else too. When all a song is is a verse (without a melody even,) you can pretty much bet that its going to sound like some other song. Just keep working on it.
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Unread post by geekmug » Sun Dec 21, 2003 2:48 pm

I'm with you on the WWBOM sound-a-like
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Sun Dec 21, 2003 3:07 pm

Weird how it's 41 seconds long...eh? lol, jk...
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