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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Wed Apr 11, 2007 8:46 pm

Here is my newest song, please give it a listen and tell me what you think.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/s2niip
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Thu Apr 12, 2007 9:06 pm

Thats a shit load of analogies! The verse seems a bit too busy for me. I bet when you let you voice go you can sing some bad ass rock songs.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Fri Apr 13, 2007 4:44 am

eliot1171 wrote:Thats a shit load of analogies! The verse seems a bit too busy for me. I bet when you let you voice go you can sing some bad ass rock songs.
Yeah, your voice seems pretty powerful!

I liked the song a lot, except probably the piano in the verse...

Great job!
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Fri Apr 13, 2007 12:47 pm

eliot1171 wrote:Thats a shit load of analogies! The verse seems a bit too busy for me. I bet when you let you voice go you can sing some bad ass rock songs.
haha yea I know, my girlfriend listened to this song the other day and now I think she hates me, but its all good

As for my voice, thanks for the comment. Everytime I compose a song and tell my friends to listen to it( or post here), they all tell me that my voice is terrible. But I work on it almost everyday and its the only one Ive got..

edit- and yea the busy chorus is one of the first things that i noticed.. ill have to work on that. thanks again
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Fri Apr 13, 2007 12:49 pm

sfmartins wrote:
eliot1171 wrote:Thats a shit load of analogies! The verse seems a bit too busy for me. I bet when you let you voice go you can sing some bad ass rock songs.
Yeah, your voice seems pretty powerful!

I liked the song a lot, except probably the piano in the verse...

Great job!
thanks for posting.

I thought that little paino run in the verse sounded awesome, but to each his own. thanks for listening.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:22 pm

6_strings_for_life wrote:
sfmartins wrote:
eliot1171 wrote:Thats a shit load of analogies! The verse seems a bit too busy for me. I bet when you let you voice go you can sing some bad ass rock songs.
Yeah, your voice seems pretty powerful!

I liked the song a lot, except probably the piano in the verse...

Great job!
thanks for posting.

I thought that little paino run in the verse sounded awesome, but to each his own. thanks for listening.
I guess the piano is a very good idea, but it didn't sound great for me... but yeah, to each his own :)

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