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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sun Apr 01, 2007 8:49 pm

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Unread post by Banjobach » Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:45 pm

The guitar rhythm is a little off in some parts. I haven't heard the original but this sounds solid in its execution. the vocals are kinda breathy but I'm sure thats what you were going for Anyways good work. Your site has a lot of covers. Do you have any originals? I'd be interested in hearing them.

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sun Apr 01, 2007 11:04 pm

Banjobach wrote:The guitar rhythm is a little off in some parts. I haven't heard the original but this sounds solid in its execution. the vocals are kinda breathy but I'm sure thats what you were going for Anyways good work. Your site has a lot of covers. Do you have any originals? I'd be interested in hearing them.
It sux because because I'm not real good at covers, but I have major issues writing my own stuff. I haven't written a song that I even mildly like in over three years.

Guitar: I know I had some rhythmic issues, but I didn't want to redo the track.

Vocals: I have a tendency to unintentionally sing covers like the original artist. Damien sings it similar.
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:16 pm

Damn, I got all excited because I thought someone actually critiqued me and I find out its a flipin bot.
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Unread post by iha » Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:33 pm

haha....

(hope you didn't think i was going to critique you too :) )
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:58 pm

iha wrote:haha....

(hope you didn't think i was going to critique you too :) )
Fuck, got me again. :lol:
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:03 pm

ive never heard the original, but i really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Thu Apr 12, 2007 7:08 pm

6_strings_for_life wrote:ive never heard the original, but i really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting
Thanks, The original is on Damien's "9" album. <-- great by the way
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