Why I don't drink Rum.

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Why I don't drink Rum.

Unread post by lyrics101 » Sat Feb 03, 2007 4:09 pm

Stay with me, safe and ignorant.

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Unread post by Banjobach » Sat Feb 03, 2007 4:11 pm

cool for about a minute

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Unread post by lyrics101 » Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:01 pm

Banjobach wrote:cool for about a minute
I didn't say it was good.
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:07 am

I think its cool, it does get a little old because its so reptitive. The beat needs some work, i dunno, i need something more "bumpin'"

Cool sounds though.
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Unread post by Willin » Sun Feb 04, 2007 1:26 pm

I liked it, it's a groovy little beat. That said, I think it needs something additional floating above the beat which stands out and makes it more remarkable. Whether that should be distorted vocals or a synth riff of some sort is up to you.

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Unread post by lyrics101 » Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:28 pm

Wow, some nice reactions. I was expecting a few laughs. Maybe I'll take the basics of it and start messing around to see what happens with it.
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Unread post by mangold » Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:16 pm

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Liked it.

Unread post by AustinG » Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:01 am

I really liked it...Sounds like you spent time mixing it...

Are ya gonna put vocals on it?

It's a nice background for a song that tells a story.. I hear most of it with spoken word..then when that synh comes in maybe a chorus comes in....?
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Unread post by iha » Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:08 am

i kinda like it too

i always like ur stuff b/c it's so different than most of the stuff posted here
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Unread post by sfmartins » Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:50 am

I like it, and I wasn't really expecting this time of music! :lol:

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