Song I started today

[mbent4679]

honestly, i'm not a fan of the verses, but i love teh chorus. the verses are too...rhyming for me. and it might just be the true fool rhyme, just seems too obvious maybe.

chorus is solid though.

and don't feel bad about people not listening, it takes a while. honest to god. one day you might post one and get three pages, one day you might post one and get 4 responses. don't get offended. people live their lives outside of the boards and sometimes it takes a while for them to listen. doesn't mean no one liked it i promise.

Not offended just eager. Have no other responses around and I don't wanna move in the wrong direction on this song.

[mbent4679]

Thnx