Major Improvement on ants marching let me know.

[mbent4679]

Haven't done a cover yet and I've been workin on this.I honestly think it sucks. Check it out and tell me what you guys think.

I slowed this one down and was more relaxed when I recorded it. Tell me what you guys think.


The new link http://www.sendspace.com/file/0vytq7

[iha]

i think you should slow it down a little

and the "take these chances" sounded off key .. or something. especially the first time.

[Willin]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

[mbent4679]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

Funny there new. Cant really afford the poly web besides the webing starts to fray after a week.

[mbent4679]

thnx guys I'll work on it.

[mangold]

Haven't done a cover yet and I've been workin on this.I honestly think it sucks. Check it out and tell me what you guys think.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ea6a1f

if you think it sucks, why would you post it and why should i take the time to listen?

[mangold]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

Funny there new. Cant really afford the poly web besides the webing starts to fray after a week.

its actually probably just the mic.

[mbent4679]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

Funny there new. Cant really afford the poly web besides the webing starts to fray after a week.

its actually probably just the mic.

Maybe but my guitars a piece of shit (a yamaha) as well I was usin a an alvarez made by some chinese guy but strings were breakin on it so I voided it for recording. Ha a 6,000 dollar guitar I can't rely on guess that biz huh. I really wish I bought a condenser mic Instead but time will bring money and money will bring a new mic so whtever.

[mbent4679]

Haven't done a cover yet and I've been workin on this.I honestly think it sucks. Check it out and tell me what you guys think.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ea6a1f

if you think it sucks, why would you post it and why should i take the time to listen?

I was board. Any honest opinion from you?
I need to know what I don't need to change.

[mangold]

Haven't done a cover yet and I've been workin on this.I honestly think it sucks. Check it out and tell me what you guys think.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ea6a1f

if you think it sucks, why would you post it and why should i take the time to listen?

I was board. Any honest opinion from you?
I need to know what I don't need to change.

i listened. its a little fast and the vocals were all over the place tonally speaking. definitely needs some work.

take some time and put some effort into the stuff you put up here if you want some honest critiques. most people arent going to spend time going in depth into something you just threw together.

i just get really put off by anyone that proceeds a recording with something along the lines of "this sucks" or "just thrown together", i didnt mean to be a dick.

[bassman462]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

Funny there new. Cant really afford the poly web besides the webing starts to fray after a week.

its actually probably just the mic.

Maybe but my guitars a piece of shit (a yamaha) as well I was usin a an alvarez made by some chinese guy but strings were breakin on it so I voided it for recording. Ha a 6,000 dollar guitar I can't rely on guess that biz huh. I really wish I bought a condenser mic Instead but time will bring money and money will bring a new mic so whtever.

kazuo yairi? because yairi's are some higher end guitars.

[AustinG]

Def slow it down...

Vocals were okay at times, just relax, you sound to anxious to get the words out. Especially when you bring it higher, you should release less air when you hit higher notes...It's all about control...

Keep playing and it will all come together...

And my elixirs never come apart in a week... you're shmoking better stuff than me.. ... If you have polyweb strings you should wipe them down after every use with a cloth.. the greese from your fingers is what will wear them away.. They'll last 10x as long if you do that.. spend the extra 10 bucks on them, they're worth it..

[mbent4679]

It's not bad at all. I'd agree with the sentiment that you should slow it down a bit. Also, get some new strings - I'd recommend elixirs. It sounds like our strings are dead.

Funny there new. Cant really afford the poly web besides the webing starts to fray after a week.

its actually probably just the mic.

Maybe but my guitars a piece of shit (a yamaha) as well I was usin a an alvarez made by some chinese guy but strings were breakin on it so I voided it for recording. Ha a 6,000 dollar guitar I can't rely on guess that biz huh. I really wish I bought a condenser mic Instead but time will bring money and money will bring a new mic so whtever.

kazuo yairi? because yairi's are some higher end guitars.

Yeah I think it's faulty Me and my buddy both use it and the strings don't hold up on it for either of us.

[mbent4679]

Def slow it down...

Vocals were okay at times, just relax, you sound to anxious to get the words out. Especially when you bring it higher, you should release less air when you hit higher notes...It's all about control...

Keep playing and it will all come together...

And my elixirs never come apart in a week... you're shmoking better stuff than me.. ... If you have polyweb strings you should wipe them down after every use with a cloth.. the greese from your fingers is what will wear them away.. They'll last 10x as long if you do that.. spend the extra 10 bucks on them, they're worth it..

Thnx I'll remember that. Cause they do sound beautiful.

[sups08]

AustinG wrote:
Def slow it down...

Vocals were okay at times, just relax, you sound to anxious to get the words out. Especially when you bring it higher, you should release less air when you hit higher notes...It's all about control...

Keep playing and it will all come together...

And my elixirs never come apart in a week... you're shmoking better stuff than me.. Wink... If you have polyweb strings you should wipe them down after every use with a cloth.. the greese from your fingers is what will wear them away.. They'll last 10x as long if you do that.. spend the extra 10 bucks on them, they're worth it..

i little trick my cuz taught me..

If you get a bottle of Germ-X, put some of that in your hand before you play. This way, you automatically rub it into your strings as you play. It cleans the strings out, and then the alcohol evaporates.

works for me.

j