Hello, I'm new. YMDT attempt/feedback please

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Lazierthanyou
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Hello, I'm new. YMDT attempt/feedback please

Unread post by Lazierthanyou » Wed Jan 24, 2007 5:36 pm

Hello everyone, I decided to record myself playing a short version of You Might Die Trying and would like any tips. I'm pretty sure I am playing the very last chord at the end wrong.
heres a link:
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid ... 6918863686

Also, for some reason, my pinky likes to stretch REALLY far out sometimes. Anyway to remedy that? Thanks.
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Unread post by Lazierthanyou » Fri Jan 26, 2007 1:19 am

hmmmm. No pointers? I really don't think I did that great at all.
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Unread post by UNCcrombie » Fri Jan 26, 2007 1:53 am

it needs to be more rhythmic in my opinion. granted you play everything right but it lacked a lot of flow
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:44 am

Not bad man, but your mutes are in the wrong place when you go to the F chord. Also, emphasize your upstrokes on the main riff more.
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Unread post by Lazierthanyou » Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:57 am

Cool, thanks for your input. I shall work on it. BTW, this site Rox! :D
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