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marcusvpais
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original, noname #1

Unread post by marcusvpais » Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:26 am

hi,

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http://www.purevolume.com/marcusvpais

this is my first original song.. no lyrics not finishied yet... but i showed all sections and riffs of it... just recorded it : P

also the covers of gs and tbillies

tell me what you guys think... : D

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Unread post by lyrics101 » Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:23 pm

I love a good waltz, so that appealed to me, but I wanted the strum patter to go somewhere, as well as the tempo and velocity of the piece (volume, intensity, attack, etc.).

You can do things with it to. Hack it apart and put it back together, and see what you end up with.
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Unread post by mbent4679 » Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:20 pm

Cool, doesn't sound complete but organize it and could be useful.

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Unread post by marcusvpais » Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:20 pm

good point.. i need to work on strumming some cool pattern... definitly not finished.. i have to organize it... and ive made it with a capo.. but i lost my capo so i recorded without it : ) thx for feedbck guys

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