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Unread post by onid41 » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:08 pm

first time im posting anything i've recorded because i always thought i sucked. the first part of this is me playing somethign which i don't even think makes sense then i play jimi thing then a little bit of where are you going.

i just want ya'll to critique my guitar playing only even though i'm singing because my voice sucks and i sing low (oh something which i am not) and shitty. thank you

EDIT: hahaha that was funny
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Unread post by iha » Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:06 pm

this should be interesting.
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Unread post by Easy E » Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:14 pm

i'll listen tomorrow
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Unread post by Banjobach » Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:26 pm

I can barely hear your voice, it frustrated me too much to listen to it all the way. As it sounds your vocals are too breathy. If you can repost with louder vocals.

Edit: sorry i didnt read the second part of your post. I guess the guitar was fine...
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Unread post by Easy E » Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:28 pm

onid41 wrote: i just want ya'll to critique my guitar playing only even though i'm singing because my voice sucks and i sing low (oh something which i am not) and shitty.
Cor wrote:I mentioned awhile ago trying to bang this huge near 7 foot woman I know. Hit it last night. I got manhandled, it was sweet.

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Unread post by mangold » Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:30 pm

not to be offensive but can i ask why you posted this if its just some high noodling?

the guitar is pretty good, your voice is nothing what i expected it would sound like. it was a pretty classy transition between the 2 btw
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Unread post by iha » Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:25 am

i like how it ends right as you're playing another chord :lol:
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Unread post by p1trick_82 » Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:32 am

any chance you got a tab of this mad intro ? :lol:


j/k

your guitar playing is good...you posted a version of dodo a while back that was pretty nice
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Unread post by sfmartins » Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:43 am

Pretty cool man!

I like the guitar a lot.
It is true that your voice is rather low, but it's not bad!

I enjoyed it a lot man! Please post more stuff!

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Unread post by onid41 » Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:47 am

hahaha i dunno why i posted this.

and i was barely singing, i just wanted some critique on just my guitar playing. sorry i suck at singing

thanks everyone
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Unread post by myxomatosis » Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:18 am

I thought the guitar playing was pretty good once you got into the song... much better than I expected

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Unread post by iha » Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:30 am

nice edit :lol:
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:57 pm

and to think all of this time i thought costa had all of the talent in your friendship.

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Unread post by mangold » Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:57 pm

id like to hear some more shit from you dino, keep posting
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Unread post by onid41 » Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:08 pm

ill probably post more
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