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video from a gig (new video added)

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:25 pm

just one song. it's about pluto.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/pluto.wmv
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:40 pm

one more (steve irwin)

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/steveirwin.wmv
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:24 pm

Nothin'?
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Unread post by Kahn » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:27 pm

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Unread post by Taylor614 » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:29 pm

Only got to listen to the Pluto one, and it was great. Didn't expect anything less. :thumbsup:
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Unread post by Kahn » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:33 pm

I thought the two goons in the back were a little akward as far as stage presence. Next time give them shakers or a triangle or something. Your vocals were good, theirs were mediocre. I like the cello, nice.

The Steve Irwin song, its kind of cheesy and I can't say that its appropriate honestly. Its kind of spoofing his death in a way, I don't know. Is that just me? It could be.

Good performance, gotta take points off for the back up singers that can't harmonize though. Would have been a lot better with just you and celloist. My $0.02
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Unread post by Kahn » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:36 pm

For the Pluto song, I suggest you sing the verse an octave higher. It seems to be too low for your range the way you are doing it now.

Just a guess, but I can tell you really like Sufjan.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:51 pm

Thanks Kahn and Taylor. And yes, I like Sufjan. And yeah, they're more comically inclined than musically inclined, so harmonization doesn't come that naturally to them.
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