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by thegr8monkeyman » Mon Dec 01, 2003 4:02 pm
Hey guys, i recorded a song i wrote, i knwo the recording is shitty, hope you can hear it... i lost my microphone so i had to use headphones to record it. other then that... tear me a new one. the harsher the better.
mick
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i rerecorded it now. still recorded with headphones, no mic. sorry. maybe this version is better. the tv is turned down...
. but still on, sorry. ill have it up as soon as i upload it. yea. i hope this version is better. if you need the lyrics because you cant hear let me know, ill post those, it might be quiet to hear, i dunno. so yea, ponce again go to town.
with regards,
mick
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by fatjack » Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:46 pm
your voice was off key for much of the song, and it sounded like you were straining too much on your vocals. the progression was also rather boring, but you did play it solidly and you kept a good meter.
and you should definitely turn the tv off next time
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by Appfro » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:26 pm
your recording quality was horrible, but i can't speak much cause so is mine
your guitar was pretty good for most of it, as fj said, kind of a boring progression, but ther are only so many that are "interesting" you had some problems w/ your rhythm in 2 or 3 places, but mostly your guitar playing was good. i agree though w/ everything that fj said about your vocals. you just sound liek you strained way too much. you may wanna try to start a little lower on the scale w/ your voice, it just sounds like youre singing out of your range adn going for a dashboard effect.
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by fatjack » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:29 pm
Appsoldier wrote:your recording quality was horrible, but i can't speak much cause so is mine
your guitar was pretty good for most of it, as fj said, kind of a boring progression, but ther are only so many that are "interesting" you had some problems w/ your rhythm in 2 or 3 places, but mostly your guitar playing was good. i agree though w/ everything that fj said about your vocals. you just sound liek you strained way too much. you may wanna try to start a little lower on the scale w/ your voice, it just sounds like youre singing out of your range adn going for a dashboard effect.
heh dashboard effect
i saw that guy play on conan, he is probably the worst singer i've seen that sings with an established band
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