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original instrumental song

Unread post by DJR » Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:13 pm

just finished a clip of an unfinished song - currenty working on lyrics with a couple guys i know - let me know what you think

http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/dave_fan_f ... /song2.mp3

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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:20 pm

cool dude, the first little progression was really cool, sounded quite original.
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Unread post by DJR » Sun Nov 30, 2003 9:47 pm

theres an opinion we can both agree on :D
no but seriously, thanks man, that means a lot

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Unread post by Xoosh » Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:34 pm

heh, someone listens to a lot of dave ;) or don ross -- dont hide your music behind reverb effects -- let the guitar notes carry themselves. as someone who only plays orriginals and usualy instrumental orriginals i've had to learn how to let the guitar speak for the music. though the song sounds like many dave jams -- all along the watch tower comes to mind, or warehouse... becareful ;)

the song is fantastic though, dont get me wrong, i cant wait to see how you finish the song.

you should check out, (obviously) tim reynolds, don ross, al di miola (i think you'd REALLY like al if you're writing music like you've showed here), paco de lucia... those are all fantastic instrumentalists...

great work,
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Unread post by DJR » Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:54 pm

yep, listen to a lot of dave :D
thanks for the advice and the reply, i'll keep all of that in mind

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Unread post by fatjack » Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:43 pm

Xoosh wrote:heh, someone listens to a lot of dave ;) or don ross -- dont hide your music behind reverb effects -- let the guitar notes carry themselves. as someone who only plays orriginals and usualy instrumental orriginals i've had to learn how to let the guitar speak for the music. though the song sounds like many dave jams -- all along the watch tower comes to mind, or warehouse... becareful ;)

the song is fantastic though, dont get me wrong, i cant wait to see how you finish the song.

you should check out, (obviously) tim reynolds, don ross, al di miola (i think you'd REALLY like al if you're writing music like you've showed here), paco de lucia... those are all fantastic instrumentalists...

great work,
X

mmm... al di miola...
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:37 pm

i agree w/ the effects comment that xoosh made. other than that, i have nothing bad to say. great little progression. id like to hear it when it's further along.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:16 pm

Cool jam you made up there , but like Xoosh said , Watchtower comes to mind for sure :)
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