Christmas Song

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Christmas Song

Unread post by trebor » Fri Nov 28, 2003 8:57 am

hi
this is my first cover. please comment thanks!

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/robxmas.mp3

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Re: Christmas Song

Unread post by DustyDave » Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:51 am

trebor wrote:hi
this is my first cover. please comment thanks!

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/robxmas.mp3
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Unread post by themaker » Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:14 am

great voice pare. shocked!
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Unread post by themaker » Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:40 am

yo pare ganda pala voice mo! kaw kasi di ka kumamakanta pag jamming tayo eh. sa december kaw naman kakanta pre! hehe 8)
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Unread post by trebor » Sun Nov 30, 2003 7:19 am

kahit bola pare salamt:P. ikaw unang nagsabi sa akin niyan and makes me happy
bat hindi sila nagcocomment????

i wish other people would comment... i know it sucks but any critiscism would really be appreciated. hint hint:P

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:24 am

I enjoyed listening to this one , your voice is on key , the guitar playing is smooth , except from during the chorus part , it sounds like you're losing a little rhythm there , and the single notes picking in the end are a little off , besides that its a really good cover , maybe try recording it at a higher volume as well , it was a little low , overall a good cover :)
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Unread post by mastermindmatthews3436 » Sun Nov 30, 2003 9:45 am

ide liek to hear it man but its suspended
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Unread post by trebor » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:12 am

damn angelfire, why does it do this? i did not post any new songs in my website? what can i do?

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:19 am

It has always been a problem with angelfire , but i uploaded it to my server so mastermindmatthews could listen to it , i hope you don't mind , also if other wanna hear it , i'll leave it on my server for a day or so , here is the link

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:15 pm

hey great job first off....good singing, good guitar...there is definitely a lag on the guitar playing, it was too slow at times. you sang with your own voice too which is good. I would like to hear from you boi!

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:25 pm

DmbFanJason wrote:there is definitely a lag on the guitar playing, it was too slow at times
Ok then it ain't me hearing things
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:34 pm

guitar was solid, yea, a little slow during the chorus. you should work on that, it kinda throws you off. vocals were on key, a little soft though, you should belt out a little more.

good job.

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