Bob Dylan cover - Corrina, Corrina

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Bob Dylan cover - Corrina, Corrina

Unread post by songofish » Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:03 pm

I dont sing much...here's an attempt

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buckets of rain, buckets of tears,
got all em buckets comin outta my ears
buckets of moonbeams in my hand
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Unread post by c_tietze » Tue Sep 12, 2006 11:55 am

Great SONG!
~ And rain washed away all her tears and I smiled done away was the sum of all my fears ~
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:20 pm

you really didn't do that bad of a job on the vocals. there were bad places, but i've heard much much much worse on these boards :lol: anyway, not bad. the beginning was a bit rough, but it got better, rhythm-wise at least the more it went. the guitar work was fine. the only suggestion i have it to keep working on those vocals. good job.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Thu Sep 14, 2006 5:21 am

Yeah, I agree that your vocals aren't that bad...
Just keep practicing, I think you'll reach a very particular style.


Nice job.
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Unread post by katie » Fri Sep 15, 2006 12:52 am

I think I'll sing this song all day tommorow! I like the simplicity. you have a nice voice and you play well while doing so. I think the way you say love and keep are cool -
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Unread post by songofish » Fri Sep 15, 2006 4:49 am

thanks for the comments guys, I really appreciate it.

Going to keep working on the vocals, when I have the chance. People seem to be much more critical off of these boards (in the 'real' world) :lol:
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got all em buckets comin outta my ears
buckets of moonbeams in my hand
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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Sep 15, 2006 10:50 am

songofish wrote:thanks for the comments guys, I really appreciate it.

Going to keep working on the vocals, when I have the chance. People seem to be much more critical off of these boards (in the 'real' world) :lol:
well too many people in the real world DON'T play or sing. here you're getting people who do play and sing and who do know what it's like to start out. i feel like it's our job here to not tell someone they suck, but to let them know where they have potential, and where they maybe...should try a different thing :lol: you have vocal potential, you just have to work on it. i've heard many people here that have no vocal potential and yet refuse to listen when you tell them that. oh well.

if you wanted to see vocal progression, you should have been here when andy (mangold) first sang. we told him, dude you have potential, you're just really really going to have to work on it. a couple years later, bam, the kid can sing. it's not going to happen over night. but w/ some work and dedication, it will happen
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