LIOG jam thing...

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LIOG jam thing...

Unread post by taparoo » Sat Sep 02, 2006 5:10 pm

I was bored and decided to mess around with Lie In Our Graves. I recorded the entire thing with a crappy Acoustic guitar and Audacity. Listeners welcomed.

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Unread post by paulaitchison » Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:51 pm

if you wanted people to listen, they would

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Unread post by taparoo » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:04 pm

paulaitchison wrote:if you wanted people to listen, they would

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Unread post by jaydog » Thu Sep 07, 2006 6:26 pm

nice, i like when the jam picks up a little toward th end.

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Unread post by taparoo » Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:36 pm

jaydog wrote:nice, i like when the jam picks up a little toward th end.
Yeah, this was really fun to record. Thanks for taking the time to listen.

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Unread post by borocks » Sat Sep 09, 2006 6:57 am

gets really cool towards the end, though I would have structured it a bit differently. Put in some rising action, a climax and some measures to fade out after that
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Unread post by TriPPin'BiLLies' » Sat Sep 09, 2006 10:01 am

i liked it a lot, it was dead on perfect. the solo at the end jam was sick, some good licks in there. but like what was said before i wish you sped up and ripped at the end of the solo and then faded it out. plus if you had lyrics it would be even better but overall very nicely done.

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Unread post by taparoo » Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:34 pm

Thanks a lot for the responses, guys. I agree that it probably should have been a bit more structured, and there's issues with the fading. Thanks for the suggestions.

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Unread post by Gold » Mon Sep 11, 2006 5:51 am

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