GOT IT 3 NEW COVERS UP

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DaveyeahMatthews
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GOT IT 3 NEW COVERS UP

Unread post by DaveyeahMatthews » Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:17 pm

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check them out please critique me
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Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:45 pm

you really could of just posted these in your thread right below this!

your voice is pitched to high for my liking, its not a bad voice though. these covers seemed a little rushed and messy
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Unread post by DaveyeahMatthews » Mon Sep 04, 2006 3:52 pm

thanks yes ik its rushed plus i dont know all the words. i was thinking of them while i was playing. thanks though :D
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Unread post by Kahn » Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:09 pm

How old are you?
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Unread post by DaveyeahMatthews » Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:16 pm

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Unread post by DaveyeahMatthews » Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:21 pm

ik i have a high voice. so does my brother and hes 24.
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:27 pm

I was listening to SDL, what is that humming in the background?

Overall your guitar work is pretty good, but you start to speed it up after the first chorus. Use a click track or metronome when you record so you stay consistent.

The Crush cover needs a lot of work. I kinda dug the rhythm at first, it was different from dave's and thats cool its a cover, but again it got consistent.

I guess my biggest suggestion is instead of posting three covers, put all your energies into one. Learn the song backwards and forwards and really try to put something up that is your best work. Quality over quantity. Push yourself and you might be suprised what you can come up with.
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Unread post by DaveyeahMatthews » Tue Sep 05, 2006 1:30 pm

thats so much man that sounds like a great idea. im going to practice so damn luckyfor a couple days and then i will replace those three with that.
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Tue Sep 05, 2006 1:51 pm

good choice, thats a great song, and of all your covers it was the best.
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