My first original song

horsmar15 · Unread post by **horsmar15** » Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:14 pm

Well, it really isn't my first original, but it is the first original i am posting on this board. Also, it is the first song that I have wrote that I haven't really hated a week after I wrote it

. The title of the song is change (at least for now until I can think of something better). and i'm still working on my vocals so if they suck ya know why (only been trying to sing for a couple months now). Well, enough of that, give it a listen and tell me what ya think
http://www.angelfire.com/music5/horsmar15/

freshead16 · Unread post by **freshead16** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 9:50 pm

sounded pretty good deed. i liked the guitar rythm and playing. seemed like u were shaky on the meledy in some parts but that comes with knowing the song better. gret job though. how many tracks u use?
peace

horsmar15 · Unread post by **horsmar15** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 11:14 pm

I don't want to keep two of the same posts going here, but to answer your question, I only used one track. That is probably why I messed up so much, because I had to do it all in one take.

freshead16 · Unread post by **freshead16** » Mon Nov 10, 2003 11:58 pm

no no u didnt screw up much in my opinion. it was really good. but i suck at guitar so what would i know.

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 6:36 am

I do my covers mostly in one take as well...

you didn't screw up... I liked it, especially the slapping rhythm... sounds good to me man!

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My first original song

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