Please Bleed and critique

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Please Bleed and critique

Unread post by MWR » Wed Nov 05, 2003 4:19 pm

Heres a cover of Ben Harpers Please Bleed. It's pretty much a straight cover of the Live at Mars version. Just follow the link and let me know what you think.

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:14 pm

wow...that was great, awesome voice.... the change in tempo is kinda odd but i've never heard the song..

fantastic!
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:20 pm

Wow! That was really great. I really can't critique it at all. Good solid guitar playing, great voice, and good recording.
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Unread post by borocks » Wed Nov 05, 2003 6:12 pm

that was great, I liked it a lot
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Nov 05, 2003 6:54 pm

Well done. Great guitar work, great recroding quality/mixing, great vocs. I wouldnt say I liked it better than when Ben does it, but unless its him this is about as good as it gets. :) Good job.
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Nov 05, 2003 8:10 pm

wow dude. very good, great voice, great guitar playing. a little shaky sounding on the chorus rhythm, but that really is my only criticism. awesome voice. man i can't believe all the great voices that are posting recordings now. good job man.
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Unread post by taylordb » Wed Nov 05, 2003 8:40 pm

That is really nice man...really nice. Good guitar work, but the vocals kick ass...alot of emotion in there. Awesome.
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Unread post by MWR » Thu Nov 06, 2003 9:22 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I was learning how to strum with my fingers(which I"m still not great at)when I recorded this. That explains my shotty ryhthm on the chorus. I was also playing and singing which no doubt contributed to some of the stumbles. Not making excuses though as it was the best I could do at the time. Thanks again to all who responded.
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Unread post by blaze » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:51 am

holy shit buddie good job and that. Mad props. Your voice rocks.
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