originial (audio)

[bassman462]

i changed the lyrics.

just a walk in the park

hello my friends let me tell you
of a man who didn't understand
that life is to short for him to worry
about it, i told him it's hard sometimes
but not to worry,


just remember
it's just a walk in the park

this man kept telling me,
you see there is all
this heartache and hurt
clouding up my life,
i just dont see a way through
this foggy afternoon, and
overcast sky of depending doom

but i tell him,

just remember
it's just a walk in the park

yes this life
is just a walk in the park

then he said,
man you dont get it i feel like the
devil is reigning over my land
i got no good crops, no women, no friends,
i feel like my neighbors have
gotten all my good news, while
i'm stuck with all these missing clues,
man even you seem a bit crazy to me

oh but my friend the good news is simple

just remember
it's just a walk in the park

that simple man

so just remember
it's just a walk in the park

just remember
it's just a walk in the park

http://www.myspace.com/iplaysongsonmyguitar

[Hydro120]

I havent gotten a chance yet to make a crappy recording of it yet, but i got some lyrics i think i might want a bit of help on.

just a walk in the park

hello my friend you've seem to
got a bit on your mind
can i be of some help for you today
well then lets take a stroll over yonder and
see what's troubling this soul

Sup, "Best of What's Around"?

[bassman462]

I havent gotten a chance yet to make a crappy recording of it yet, but i got some lyrics i think i might want a bit of help on.

just a walk in the park

hello my friend you've seem to
got a bit on your mind
can i be of some help for you today
well then lets take a stroll over yonder and
see what's troubling this soul

Sup, "Best of What's Around"?

before i put anything down i fumbled around with some other lyrics and decided for now id open it with hello my friend, but then i couldnt really see how id take it from there. i just dont see how else to open it up to the rest of the song, and my other two verses beginnings seem too repetitive.

[bassman462]

k possibly, changing first verse too

come on in my friend
lets shoot the breaze
and go for a walk
dont get stressed out
for this life is short
and isnt worth your worrying

[Hydro120]

I was just half-kidding man. Take my comment lightly. It sounded pretty similar. Don't change them just because of what I said.

Either way, looks good so far. But as with any lyrics, the music they go with can either make them better or worse. So I'd have to hear the music too, to make a good judgement.

[bassman462]

oh no, i recognized it before then.

[bassman462]

i put up the song on a myspace account

http://www.myspace.com/iplaysongsonmyguitar

sorry for my terrible sing/talking.

[mattinbeloit]

haha. I laughed when I heard that. Not in a bad way, but in a good way! Thats a catchy little riff when you do the just a walk in the park part, me likey! I will say that you should practice this alot, I think you can do much better, practice practice, but good start, its great.

[RunsWithBuffalo]

Cool riff man, and i agree with matt that the walk in the park is interesting. i think its wonderfully dissonant and really separates that from the rest of the song.

Singing needs a little work, but keep it up, cool song!

[mattinbeloit]

Cool riff man, and i agree with matt that the walk in the park is interesting. i think its wonderfully dissonant and really separates that from the rest of the song.

Singing needs a little work, but keep it up, cool song!

I wish I could of said it that way...

[Trippin Hillbilly]

That could actually be a really good song. Practice it a bit, the walk in the park bit is awesome.