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Unread post by JacknCoke » Thu Oct 30, 2003 12:11 am

hey, just wanted to throw this out there..im kind of new at the recording thing so bare with me...this is just a little acoustic stunt i tried...

http://home.comcast.net/~edwardcw/fullacoustictrial.wma
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Thu Oct 30, 2003 12:11 am

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Unread post by Appfro » Thu Oct 30, 2003 12:27 am

ok, being honest here.

i really really liked the rhythm guitar...but that's about it. i thought the lead guitar part to me was way to high and it just didn't fit at all IMO. also the kick drum...(or whatever it was) was really off most of the time. w/ a lower fuller lead and 86 the kick drum it would be better.
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Unread post by JacknCoke » Thu Oct 30, 2003 12:42 am

lol...thanks for the opinion...i have a lot of friends that aren't into music, atleast on a technical level, and they hoot and rave about stuff, like this song...so i had to put it up to get realistic feedback from people who know something about something..thanks...
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Unread post by Jay » Thu Oct 30, 2003 12:57 am

you have the best screen name ever.
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Unread post by JacknCoke » Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:05 am

haha, how can you go wrong with some jack and coke...have a glass right infront of me, doing me well :lol:
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Unread post by Jay » Thu Oct 30, 2003 10:25 am

whenever i go out, coke shows up, and his friends rum, jack, and the captain seem to be on a rotational basis...
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Unread post by Appfro » Thu Oct 30, 2003 10:45 am

JacknCoke wrote:lol...thanks for the opinion...i have a lot of friends that aren't into music, atleast on a technical level, and they hoot and rave about stuff, like this song...so i had to put it up to get realistic feedback from people who know something about something..thanks...
i don't want you to think that i hated it...cause i didn't. i just think it needs some tweaking. :D keep posting...add some lyrics :)
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Unread post by MWR » Thu Oct 30, 2003 5:34 pm

Get the recording/playing as clean as possible then add melody/lyrics and it will rock.
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