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Unread post by DJR » Mon Oct 27, 2003 4:52 pm

made another recording

its called elements, kinda got inspired by the crappy rainy day to try writing something

http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/dave_fan_for_life/

any comments would be gladly appreciated :D
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Oct 27, 2003 5:08 pm

I liked it. The recording quality wasn't all that great, but you can't you can really do anything about that. the guitar in the beginning sounded really good. nice lick there. you probably should have ended the song with that lick fading out.

overall, it was pretty good. i liked this better than the other original -> wwbom. :)
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Unread post by DJR » Mon Oct 27, 2003 5:30 pm

yeah i'm never gonna be concerned with quality, thanks for the reply :D
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Oct 27, 2003 6:00 pm

suspended, ill be back
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Unread post by DJR » Mon Oct 27, 2003 7:50 pm

its back up
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Unread post by EnFuego » Mon Oct 27, 2003 8:50 pm

You did an awesome job on the intro and outro. I like the rest of the guitar, You need to get some lyrics for that
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Unread post by DJR » Mon Oct 27, 2003 9:22 pm

yeah thats my weakest point, singing and songwriting but i'm thinkin
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