song I made

dmb_rulz · Unread post by **dmb_rulz** » Mon May 08, 2006 4:33 pm

I made this song last night. I did the vocals quiet on purpose for the mood of the song. Anyway tell me what you think.

http://download.yousendit.com/939C629263509151

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Tue May 09, 2006 10:57 am

You thought the vocals were quite. I turned it up to hear the guitar and the vocals were booming compared to it. I'm not going to lie, it was a bit repetative but the lyrics have potential. Your voice sounds ok but the solo at the end seem pretty out of place.

dmb_rulz · Unread post by **dmb_rulz** » Fri May 12, 2006 7:02 pm

Thanks for the imput do you think the guitar is alright. I know its kind of repetative also.

jaydog · Unread post by **jaydog** » Mon May 15, 2006 1:40 am

Your guitar playing is fine. But the guitar sounds weird, metallic, like you are using a quater for a pick or something. To be honest your singing isnt very good. I think it would be a good idea to do some vocal exercises in order to learn how to sing on key. The song is very repetative. Keep working at it. Youve got the guitar skills. Work on your voice, it can improve.

dmb_rulz · Unread post by **dmb_rulz** » Tue May 16, 2006 5:36 pm

Thanks so much for the info guys. Yes my voice has a long way to go. Thats why I love this place because of the great honesty.

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