First Original

[NJPearce22]

Well...this is a little tune that I came up with and incorporated it into my new 'band' thing. It's kinda rough, but it gets the point across. I'm not sure of the lyrical side of it yet, so it's just an instrumental for now. I play the rhythm guitar in it. Tell me what you think...

http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=22OE ... 2Q3TX3PX2J

[Jenns4Ever9501]

Ya know, simplicity is really underrated nowadays. It's amazing what kind of depth you can find in a simple 3-chord progression like yours. I think once there are some decent lyrics and melody to it, this could be a fantastic song. I've always been a fan of this type of progression, building chords and resolving on the minor. Good work dude.

[NJPearce22]

Ya know, simplicity is really underrated nowadays. It's amazing what kind of depth you can find in a simple 3-chord progression like yours. I think once there are some decent lyrics and melody to it, this could be a fantastic song. I've always been a fan of this type of progression, building chords and resolving on the minor. Good work dude.

Thank you!

[mattinbeloit]

That was simple and nice, I enjoyed it. When you figure out vocals, i think you should use the solo as a building block for how you sing the vocals, I think it would work out nicley. Keep working on it, good start.