the Space Between (acoustic)

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the Space Between (acoustic)

Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:55 am

I decided to post the Space Between. Just felt like it :-P .

Anyways, here it is, tell me what you think (my voice wasn't feeling great tonight, so it's not at it's 100% efficantcy.

http://www.angelfire.com/folk/singer-so ... etween.mp3
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Thu Oct 23, 2003 8:29 am

I liked it a lot. The guitar sounded kinda dead, but it's a hard song to pull off solo. Your vocals were very strong. I like how you changed the vocals only slightly, enough to make it your own. Adding a second guitar track with the 979(h10) fill would've rounded it out a little more, but it still sounded good. Nice job!

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Unread post by tjmac66pc » Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:24 am

nice job rant...sounded really good!

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Thu Oct 23, 2003 4:16 pm

Sounded kick ass rant..I agree.. your vocals made it your own without changing it too much.. good job and thanks for the maker help ;)
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Unread post by DJR » Thu Oct 23, 2003 4:23 pm

hey man that was cool - totally have a good voice, im jeolous

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Unread post by grock » Thu Oct 23, 2003 4:36 pm

DJR07 wrote:hey man that was cool - totally have a good voice, im jeolous
guitar sounds kinda "pahwong" for lack of a better word.

and i can definately tell you have some kind of theatre experience. i was expecting the jets to come out and start fighting with some puerto ricans or mufasa to make an appearance (i'm just joking). ya so kinda like something i might hear in a musical.

it's not dave but's it's pretty darn good. rad job.

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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Fri Oct 24, 2003 1:05 am

Thanks guys. The reason why the guitar sounds like that, is because I was trying my best to make it sound low like a baritone. I normaly play it with more top end and less bass. Thanks again. What I am waiting for is fatjack, what do you think?
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Unread post by taylordb » Fri Oct 24, 2003 5:09 am

I liked it Ranting, listened to it several times to be honest. Vocals very strong and good.
Something about the vocals I can't put my finger on though..but I'll try....some of the parts did sound like you were putting a slightly more "theatrical" voice to it, a little too pronounced and articulated. But the other areas where, for lack of a better description, you were more relaxed it was very good...had good emotion.

Far better than I could have done. Props my friend.

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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Sat Oct 25, 2003 2:38 am

Well, about that, again the reason why it changed was because I said my voice wasn't feeling well that night. Also, you should have heard me a year ago. You would have never understood a word I was singing. I actualy have since then, trying to sing words that you can understand, but it got relaxing after a while. I have been told sometimes, by people, that I sitll need to pernounce certain songs more. I am not trying to be articulate in any extreme way, just to try and make sure my words are understandable.
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Unread post by stln » Sat Oct 25, 2003 5:52 am

great job, good vocals and guitar!

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sat Oct 25, 2003 9:52 am

It was a good cover.. and i hope people told you that you needed to pronounce more.. cause if a robot told you or something.. that'd be strange..
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Unread post by phatnev » Sat Oct 25, 2003 6:23 pm

Dude thats fucking great keep it up
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Oct 27, 2003 1:43 pm

ill comment when i get home

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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Oct 27, 2003 6:15 pm

pretty good, yea i have to agree w/ everyone else that i liked your voice and the way you changed just a little. your vocals may have been a little too loud though. but they were good. guitar's a little dead like someone already said, but overall, good job.

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