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Miller1221
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by Miller1221 » Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:44 pm
original i came up with its only one track but with accoustic and vocals i made up
please critique
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by Miller1221 » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:50 pm
haha does anyone ever listen to the stuff i post, ive never had anyone reply to the past couple recordings
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by Cor » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:52 pm
Pretty cool riff.
It's kind of hard to hear the vocals, but they sounded good, from what I could tell.
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by Kahn » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:53 pm
I really like the guitar riff. It is really hard to hear your voice. I'd like to hear a little more "oomph" in your vocals, they are too subtle. The guitar is great though. Try re-recording with the vocals turned up. I'm sure more people could offer more valueble criticism then.
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by Miller1221 » Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:29 pm
well i was just planning on making up a song on the guitar, the whole thing was improvised, i jsut played what i felt, i didnt have any words either they just came so i wasnt planning on singing
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by Miller1221 » Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:31 pm
by the way i like your moe. pics
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