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Unread post by musicman007 » Tue Feb 28, 2006 9:11 pm

hey thought i would get more interest if i did a dave tune. Have a listen.

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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Wed Mar 01, 2006 7:22 am

Your voice is very nice bro, but the timing is a little bit off throughout most of the recording with your guitar playing. I would suggest recording with a click track/metranome if you can.
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Wed Mar 01, 2006 4:41 pm

Decent job. I would also suggest working on your timing. I hear a lot of potential and think practice is going to be the key to smoothing out your performance. Good voice and I commend you for not trying to sound like Dave and coming off as Kermit.
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Wed Mar 01, 2006 6:59 pm

GreedylilPig wrote:Good voice and I commend you for not trying to sound like Dave and coming off as Kermit.
hahaaha, I like that.

Good Job on a tough song. Like what was said above, work on the timing a bit. I don't know what you were recording with but it was really odd how at some times the sound was very crisp and then very muffled. What i don't understand is how the vocals sound so clear but the guitar doesnt.

Your singing is good, but it sounds like youre straining a bit on some of the higher notes. Other than that, I liked it.

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Unread post by musicman007 » Mon Mar 06, 2006 5:40 pm

thanks all for the feedback. As for recording i only have crappy mic computer mic, but i am in the process of getting some decent recording tools to make everything a little better. But thanks for the advice.


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Unread post by J_Clark » Mon Mar 06, 2006 8:15 pm

GreedylilPig wrote:Decent job. I would also suggest working on your timing. I hear a lot of potential and think practice is going to be the key to smoothing out your performance. Good voice and I commend you for not trying to sound like Dave and coming off as Kermit.
Well said. Timing is critical to make a great song. Maybe try a metronome or something? I also find tapping my foot helps more than you think it would. And yes, nice voice! I love it when guys will sing a Dave song in their own voice. There is only one Dave in the world, so dont try to sing like him! You will not sound the same! Back to the point, nice song bro! 8-)
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