originial

[bassman462]

this is an originial i wrote on guitar, ive been working on it alot lately, and i just want to get some feedback with what i got. there's like a small little solo thing in there that i dont know if im going to do or not. its really repetitive since there's no lyrics or anything. but its only like 3:00 minutes.

EDIT- o ya cat stevens directly influenced this song pretty much.

http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09G5 ... FH6XKX8GG2

[bassman462]

ok, i guess not.

[J_Clark]

Sounds cool. But that kind of guitar playing I beleive would fit better with lyrics. To me, it does not sound like a solo song. A would suggest adding in lyrics.