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Unread post by take_a_jimi_thing » Sun Feb 26, 2006 12:19 pm

take it easy on me PLEASE. only been playing a couple months and i just bought the acid studio program yesterday, still havent figured out editing on it. be gentle

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Unread post by Cor » Sun Feb 26, 2006 12:46 pm

I'm checking it out right now. If possible you may want to encode it to an mp3 to make the size smaller and more attractive to other potential listeners.

It's really quiet, I noticed. maybe bump up the levels.

The intro transitioning into the chord strumming was a little disjointed.

If you could write a little melody line for it, it would be more apealing. Considering you've been playing a couple of months, it's about what I expected.

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Unread post by take_a_jimi_thing » Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:05 pm

how do i make it an mp3?
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Mon Feb 27, 2006 3:17 pm

The finger picked part really reminds me of Matt Nathanson's Angel. This is nice, little GCD progression?

Your rhythm falters sometimes, try recording with a metronome, it works wonders.

Do you have lyrics yet?

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Unread post by take_a_jimi_thing » Mon Feb 27, 2006 6:33 pm

no lyrics juuuusstt let..still kinda workin on em. i cant stop writing things that rhyme, geuss its the way my mind works. yeah GCD you got it. nah, like raif, im still scared of myself and what i might write..
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