new song "Chasing a Dream"

[mattinbeloit]

I've been working on a new song the past 2 days called "Chasing a Dream". It's about halfway done but i figured i would give it a shot and record it so I could play around with some stuff. I did it in my room so the quality isn't the best but it turned out ok. I also tried doing harmony with myself at 2 points and like how it sounds so let me know what you think about that. I also read off a piece of paper when I sang so once I memorize the words the voice will sound better, I sound a little hesitant at points.

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3JZF ... 95345X4995

[dmbguitar718]

Wow, this is really beautiful. I really love that nice clean guitar work. I honestly have no critiques. I love it exactly how it is.

Just finished. I absolutely loved it. Your voice sounds a tad shaky at times, but whatever, this is rough. The clean guitar was awesome listening to. I love being able to close my eyes and let the music take control, however gay that may sound. Definitely get around to me if/when you re-record this, I'd love to hear it. Great job...Matt, is it?

[mattinbeloit]

thanks man, glad you liked it, and ya it's matt and i'm in beloit ....

[J_Clark]

Yes, this song is beautiful! I love it! I would very strongly advise you to continue this song, as I know many people start a song and then give up. It sounds great, especially the harmony! I do have a critique. As you said, you read the lyrics so they sound shaky. Yes, you did sound hesitant at times, but as you said you are going to fix this! T"his will make a good song into a great song! Good luck