hey tranny, hows it goin?
this is decent, real good recording quality, the guitar sounds real good. here are my comments:
1) the rhythm track is too intricate and has too many picked notes, should be almost 100% strum imo, that clutters the lead alot less
2) alot of the time i feel like you think you have to improv every beat, which is not the case, the best soloists know when not to play
3) try repeating certain licks for a few beats to give it a little more rhythm, it makes it all the cooler sounding then when you come out of the lick
4) i would say try not to go so quickly from high to low, once you get down to e a and d, chill there for a little while until you kick it back up to g b e
5) incoroporate some slides and more pulls and hammers in there, itll sound more like a guitar and much cooler
6) dont be afraid to solo on two strings at once, like if youre using the blues on G (i think you were) maybe do one a few of these:
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itl make your solos and improvs alot more dynamic
i think thats all i got for ya... keep workin and postin!
edit: now im playing along and this is fun too
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