Reflection in The Dirt

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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Thu Feb 16, 2006 12:09 pm

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:43 pm

Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker? :lol:
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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:48 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker? :lol:
Huh?
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:53 pm

It's interesting. I like it, nice structure in the song. Doesn't get repetitive.
Some constructive criticism:
I think it lacks a hook, something to remember the song by. If that makes sense.
Also, the vocals aren't bad but there's alot of off notes. I'd get rid of the delay on the vocals at the end.

Good song though.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:54 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker? :lol:
Huh?
Was making a funny. I meant are you on the left or right speaker...
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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:55 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:It's interesting. I like it, nice structure in the song. Doesn't get repetitive.
Some constructive criticism:
I think it lacks a hook, something to remember the song by. If that makes sense.
Also, the vocals aren't bad but there's alot of off notes. I'd get rid of the delay on the vocals at the end.

Good song though.

That makes a lot of sense actually Miguel, because I feel the same way.

As for the off notes here and there, my buddy just wasn't feelin' it. I'm sure, you've felt the same way :wink:


Thanks for the critique.
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