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Unread post by eliot1171 » Fri Feb 03, 2006 3:52 pm

I don't really get many replies in this forum but I would appreciate if I could get some for this please.

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Unread post by castellar » Sat Feb 04, 2006 1:32 am

great quality recrding. Sounds like your holding back a little on the vocals. Try using your diaphram more.

Thats all i got....intruments sound great.
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Unread post by JCork » Sat Feb 04, 2006 12:54 pm

I think you sound like you have an Irish accent a little bit

anyways, not bad at all... just thought a few things i noticed...

and the difficult is coming here should sound a little more like HAAAIR lol

your melody line is a little skrewed up, as if you were reading it and not sure how dave sang it, but it is your own thing so do with it what you want
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sat Feb 04, 2006 5:00 pm

Yea i found myself between my singing and dave's. I definitly didn't try to sing like dave but I listened to the track as I recorded the vocals and in parts I sound like im trying to sound like him too much. This is a pretty hard song for me to sing and I haven't known how to play it for very long.

Thanks for at least taking the time to listen. I really do appreciate it.
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Unread post by wayward_blue » Sat Feb 04, 2006 5:32 pm

Pretty good stuff! Your vocals have some sketchy spots but over all good job. :thumbsup:

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sat Feb 04, 2006 7:17 pm

wayward_blue wrote:Pretty good stuff! Your vocals have some sketchy spots but over all good job. :thumbsup:
Thanks, yea this type of song is hard for me to sing. I usually don't cover dmb songs because a lot don't fit my voice well.
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Unread post by buffjam9011 » Sun Feb 05, 2006 11:57 pm

wasn't perfect but i enjoyed it. you need some bass :)

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Feb 06, 2006 4:44 am

eliot1171 wrote:Yea i found myself between my singing and dave's. I definitly didn't try to sing like dave but I listened to the track as I recorded the vocals and in parts I sound like im trying to sound like him too much. This is a pretty hard song for me to sing and I haven't known how to play it for very long.

Thanks for at least taking the time to listen. I really do appreciate it.
I haven't listened but that's your problem. It's always gonna sound messed up if you do that.

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Unread post by taylordb » Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:37 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
eliot1171 wrote:Yea i found myself between my singing and dave's. I definitly didn't try to sing like dave but I listened to the track as I recorded the vocals and in parts I sound like im trying to sound like him too much. This is a pretty hard song for me to sing and I haven't known how to play it for very long.

Thanks for at least taking the time to listen. I really do appreciate it.
I haven't listened but that's your problem. It's always gonna sound messed up if you do that.
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Unread post by Lbacker » Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:13 am

nice work, I love playing this song more than any other. Just keep singing it, it will smooth out, mainly the parts after 1:30 till like 2:30. It always gets tough there.

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Mon Feb 06, 2006 2:49 pm

Go Huskers, I go to the University as well!
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Unread post by Kahn » Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:26 pm

I agree with everything that was said alllready. Keep posting and practicing :)

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