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Unread post by paywad927 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 5:37 pm

very nice, i enjoyed listening to that in german. now, how about dreams of our fathers in german :lol: :wink:
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Unread post by borocks » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:13 pm

paywad927 wrote:very nice, i enjoyed listening to that in german. now, how about dreams of our fathers in german :lol: :wink:
I don't know that song, but I'll check it out to tell you if I could do one or not. ..
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Unread post by Cor » Sun Oct 12, 2003 12:57 pm

I loved it!

I thought your voice as great, but the guitar was out of tune a little.

Also, it got out of control during the "Mikey Carson" part. A lot of words, I mean.

But, wow, it was sweet!

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Unread post by borocks » Sun Oct 12, 2003 4:27 pm

Cor wrote:I loved it!

I thought your voice as great, but the guitar was out of tune a little.

Also, it got out of control during the "Mikey Carson" part. A lot of words, I mean.

But, wow, it was sweet!

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Yeah, that's right, during the third verse I had to rush like hell. The mistake I made was to translate Dave's words directly and so in german it takes a bit longer to do that appropiately. I might better have done a verse with a different meaning...(but lack of creativity, u know).

Thanx for your review I greatly appreciate that.

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Unread post by Roastbeef » Tue Oct 14, 2003 12:25 pm

I too thought it was cool, especially due to the fact that you substituted the names with those of actual people. Guitar playing was great, although it was out of tune a bit. Your voice sounded great. Very natural in your native language. Cool stuff!

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Unread post by borocks » Tue Oct 14, 2003 1:02 pm

Roastbeef wrote:I too thought it was cool, especially due to the fact that you substituted the names with those of actual people. Guitar playing was great, although it was out of tune a bit. Your voice sounded great. Very natural in your native language. Cool stuff!
I think it's the only song in which I managed to sound like me, because I did the lyrics and I knew what I was saying.
Then I did the English covers, I always listened to Dave and tried to sing it similarly. That might caused this "unnatural thing", which lots of people mentioned...But I think I'm gettin better with my English...hope so at least.

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Unread post by Cor » Tue Oct 14, 2003 3:56 pm

borocks wrote:
Cor wrote:I loved it!

I thought your voice as great, but the guitar was out of tune a little.

Also, it got out of control during the "Mikey Carson" part. A lot of words, I mean.

But, wow, it was sweet!

Cory
Yeah, that's right, during the third verse I had to rush like hell. The mistake I made was to translate Dave's words directly and so in german it takes a bit longer to do that appropiately. I might better have done a verse with a different meaning...(but lack of creativity, u know).

Thanx for your review I greatly appreciate that.

Peace, Bo.
No prob! :wink:

Cory
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