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djvt81 · Unread post by **djvt81** » Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:26 pm

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RunsWithBuffalo · Unread post by **RunsWithBuffalo** » Fri Jan 13, 2006 4:06 pm

pretty good playing. It sounds like you are missing a mute while playing the main riff, it repeats too quickly. Also the "take all that we can" part seemed a little shaky, work on that. I liked the little swim naked outro. Overal pretty good playing, your treble seemed a bit high, try adding a little warmth to your sound.

Good job, keep posting

djvt81 · Unread post by **djvt81** » Fri Jan 13, 2006 7:40 pm

thanks

the take all we can get part is messed up it needs work
I suppose i am missing a mute its hard to imitate dave's mutes he is the master

ive only been at it 2 years

thus ill keep practicing

dj

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 1:21 pm

the rhythm of the verse doesn't work. beat with your foot when playing it, it'll help you to fix that

good job, other than that

worldofsweetness · Unread post by **worldofsweetness** » Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:33 pm

just an interesting observation: although you probably didn't mean to, you're actually playing the main verse riff in 7/8, while dave plays it in 4/4. Personally, i think its a cool twist on what he does. if you want to play the way he is, just add in an extra beat between the measures. good job overall.

djvt81 · Unread post by **djvt81** » Sat Jan 28, 2006 1:06 pm

thanks worldofsweetness

for the feedback when i do play dave covers I think it is fun to put your own twist into it.

but are you saying that I need to put an extra mute at the end of the verse to make it 4/4?

dj

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