These are some lyrics for a song i have been working on here yesterday and today. if i decide that it doesn't suck too much i will post a recording tomorrow, but some feedback on lyrics would be nice
Green Tea leaves
Bottle full of Jade
lights me up
Consciousness begins to fade
Apathetic Obligation
comin to this town
now i leave
with my feet off the ground
oh vast sea
briny and green
leave my head a cloud
oh vast sea
briny and green
i feel my senses drown
Over a fortnight wasted
Quiet Contemplation
Redeemed in one night's joy
Bright Exultation
sky at night
close enough to touch
the night rolls on
we're in no rush
oh vast sea
briny and green
leave my brain a cloud
oh vast sea
briny and green
i feel my senses drown
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