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Unread post by waffle_house_jam » Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:41 am

This is an old one, but I thought I'd post and see what you guys thought...any feedback is appreciated!
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:54 am

Cool. I like how it starts of quite, kind of fingerpicked and then it gets a little thicker and louder as you strum it. Does it have any lyrics? I have a ton of old songs on my computer, its worth it to sometimes bring them back to life and try to flush them out. Sometimes you get stuck and all you need is to put it on the back burner for a bit.

Good start though, maybe add a second guitar part too
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Unread post by waffle_house_jam » Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:27 pm

Thanks! I don't have any lyrics, I've never been able to write them, I always write stuff then hate it, so it doesn't work out that great.
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