My first covers... I tried.

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My first covers... I tried.

Unread post by IvoryZion » Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:08 pm

These 2 are my first cover songs. Feel free to critique them but please be kind. The first song is dedicated to Whit, since... well she's the only girl I know of on the boards (it's like prison here). The second song has more of a country/western feel to it. Hope you like them.

Thank you.


Song 1 - To you Whit

Song 2 - My roots
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Unread post by NJPearce22 » Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:09 pm

Covers? Don't you mean originals?
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Unread post by castellar » Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:25 pm

i hate to be the one to ask this but , are you joking?

i only listened to the first one and you sound like you need a little help.
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Unread post by onid41 » Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:29 pm

hahaha what the hell?
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Unread post by Jenns4Ever9501 » Wed Jan 04, 2006 11:03 pm

rotflmao, It's like watching an American Idol audition gone TERRIBLY wrong. LOL
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Unread post by Dheibs » Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:24 am

:stare: .......shoot me
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:02 am

that bad??
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Re: My first covers... I tried.

Unread post by whatshername » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:23 am

IvoryZion wrote:These 2 are my first cover songs. Feel free to critique them but please be kind. The first song is dedicated to Whit, since... well she's the only girl I know of on the boards (it's like prison here). The second song has more of a country/western feel to it. Hope you like them.

Thank you.


Song 1 - To you Whit

Song 2 - My roots
"To you Whit"

TO ME?!?!??!

:P
-whit

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Unread post by whatshername » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:26 am

IvoryZion wrote:These 2 are my first cover songs. Feel free to critique them but please be kind. The first song is dedicated to Whit, since... well she's the only girl I know of on the boards (it's like prison here). The second song has more of a country/western feel to it. Hope you like them.

Thank you.


Song 1 - To you Whit

Song 2 - My roots
wait...WHAT?!

he was serious???

what is this? i'm freaked out
-whit

my music: http://www.facebook.com/whitneyborisenok

more of my music: http://www.youtube.com/fourtyoneantz
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Re: My first covers... I tried.

Unread post by i-am-me » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:29 am

whatshername wrote:
IvoryZion wrote:These 2 are my first cover songs. Feel free to critique them but please be kind. The first song is dedicated to Whit, since... well she's the only girl I know of on the boards (it's like prison here). The second song has more of a country/western feel to it. Hope you like them.

Thank you.


Song 1 - To you Whit

Song 2 - My roots
wait...WHAT?!

he was serious???

what is this? i'm freaked out
i wouldn't look too much into it...seemed innocent enough. weird, but i don't think he's trying to e-rape you. lol
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:29 am

I thought you struggled with the high notes a little bit.
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Re: My first covers... I tried.

Unread post by whatshername » Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:35 am

i-am-me wrote:
whatshername wrote:
IvoryZion wrote:These 2 are my first cover songs. Feel free to critique them but please be kind. The first song is dedicated to Whit, since... well she's the only girl I know of on the boards (it's like prison here). The second song has more of a country/western feel to it. Hope you like them.

Thank you.


Song 1 - To you Whit

Song 2 - My roots
wait...WHAT?!

he was serious???

what is this? i'm freaked out
i wouldn't look too much into it...seemed innocent enough. weird, but i don't think he's trying to e-rape you. lol
i've come to the decision that it has to be someone from the boards on a different name because i've never directed a post towards this person..and that video is apparently a "parody".
-whit

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Unread post by Swede » Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:03 pm

i´ll buy you a ticket to Sweden just for you playing live for me and my friends at a party
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Thu Jan 05, 2006 1:48 pm

wow lol
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Unread post by Appfro » Thu Jan 05, 2006 1:54 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
i was thinking, man, you guys are being straight up assholes...until i watched the videos.
obviously a joke. no one says a country/western feel about a song like acky breaky heart
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